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Given the opportunity to speak their own authority as writers, given a turn in the conversation, students can claim their stories as primary source material and transform their experiences into evidence. They might, if given enough encouragement, be empowered not to serve the academy and accommodate it, not to write in the persona of Everystudent, but rather to write essays that will change the academy (30).

When a student is given the chance to cater their personal stories to the audience, in an academic writing piece; the writing itself will make a change and help that student step out of that "academy", if and when encouraged. As I read this section of the article, I was able to make many connections to recent articles we have read and …show more content…

To put it differently, when we converse, text message, or even write our thoughts on paper, making constant corrections; we might change, add on, or take off from our original statements. Sommers uses her personal experience to show that we might retract from what we might have stated earlier on. In addition, she later adds on that in between her drafts she takes a shower and meditates and revises what she has communicated. She uses the example of her and her colleague and the conversation they had in the parking lot. She makes sure to include the story-evidence-of her father and not trusting his native voice to teach them German to connect it to her main point. Sommers describes the issues as the either/or theory. When I am in between drafts, like my NI remix, I question myself, "is it worth it that I add this to my statements or should I keep it out?" It is like Sommers said it is an either/or situation, when you distance yourself from both, there is no space for

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