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The Sniper Response Essay

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“The Sniper”, is an action thriller about a sniper in the Irish republic, a man who is fighting for freedom, or, as stated in the story, “A man who is used to looking into the eyes death”(O’Flaharty 1). He is fighting for his life, this is life or death, little did he know who was fighting on the other side. This story is very suspenseful, and I will tell you what makes suspense so intriguing to us readers.
Tired, weak, and weary, the sniper lays atop the parapet, it is nighttime, suspense at this point is crawling. He’s hungry, thirsty, and starts smoking, there is another sniper, he almost gets `shot because of the light of his smoke. This story is very suspenseful, it keeps you on the edge of your seat every paragraph by using words of …show more content…

Like when the enemy sniper shot at him, or when the woman pointed to him. These are both conflicts that keep you suspicion level extremely high. Us as readers need to be entertained almost every paragraph. Like when the sniper got shot, “ ‘I’m hit.’ He muttered.” (O’Flaherty 1)Lack of entertainment, may cause the reader's lack of attention to the story. And boy oh boy this story gives you great entertainment. If nobody was getting shot at, then the suspense would be the sniper trying to cure for his bleeding forearm. When he stopped the bleeding of the forearm, the suspense went back to him trying to kill the other sniper. Even if there wasn’t a shooting scene all the time, the author made this story great by choosing more suspenseful ideas that could’ve happened in real life. If this story didn’t have any entertainment or excitement, it wouldn’t be suspicious at all.
Another fact on why this story is suspenseful, is the use of big events. Extreme, scary events make a story suspenseful. Events like shooting, killing, getting shot at, keeps this story suspense packed and very entertaining. Why are big events so suspenseful and entertaining? The reason these “big events” keep you on the edge of your seat is that they put you in the story. The author does a good job of making you think about how scary and terrifying it would be to be in the main character's position he is in the story. “Jeez! What if I was in a war? Would I buckle under the pressure? Would I panic? Will I

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