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Theme Of Suspense In The Sniper

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Between the three stories, “The Dogs Could Teach Me,” “The Flowers,” and “The Sniper.” “The Sniper” demonstrates the best suspenseful text between the three stories. To create a suspenseful story, “The Sniper” develops multiple moments of suspense. For instance one illustration of suspense in “The Sniper” is, “He paused for a moment, considering whether he should risk a smoke. It was dangerous. The flash might be seen in the darkness, and there were enemies watching. He decided to take the risk.” This is a suspenseful moment in “The Sniper” because if the sniper risks to smoke, he will be giving away his position and could be shot at by the enemy's. Another representation of suspense is, “Pressing his lips together, he took a deep breath …show more content…

Explaining that “ flash might be seen in the darkness, and there were enemies watching,” implying that if he takes the risk to smoke his position might be compromised. Then he could be shot at, injured or even killed. Also, the author adds in this detail over deciding to take a smoke and this creates more suspense, even though he didn’t have too add this detail into the story for us to understand the story, since he did the reader thinks Don’t smoke you could die, it’s a bad idea, and you don’t even need to smoke. This creates more tension between the reader and the main character the sniper leading to more suspense. While “The Flowers” doesn’t develop the suspense just plainly states it. An example of this is “Her heel became lodged in the broken ridge between brow and nose, and she reached down quickly, unafraid, to free herself. It was only when she saw his naked grin that she gave a little yelp of surprise.” This just plainly states she is surprised, it doesn’t describe it in a way of where she was scared or worried, which shows why “The Sniper” demonstrates better suspense then “The flowers.” A way “The Dogs Could Teach Me,” doesn’t develop as good of suspense is where the text, says “As I did, kicked sideways, caught my knee on a sharp snag, and felt the wood enter under the kneecap and tear it loose,” and “I don’t think I passed out

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