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Personal Narrative: Six Flags

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On October 28th, 2017 my mother said “here” and gave me $30. “What’s this for?” I asked. “$10 is for lunch and the other $20 is for you to go to Six Flags with your friends (Keion Flenoid, Kamaurion Stokes, and Kelly Dang.) after your chess tournament.” The next morning, my mother took me to my chess tournament where me and my team (Gateway Middle Chess club) placed fourth in the tournament. At 4:25 Keion’s mom picked the four of us up from the Global Citizenship Center where we drove to our destination of Six Flags. At the time i was excited until my fear of heights kicked in when i saw the Superman drop from the parking lot. While my mind saying no at the top of its lungs my body kept moving along just staring at the Superman Drop. Just …show more content…

At that time my body was petrified my friends had to get my hands unstuck from the railing in line. “Negrochild let go!”, said Keion. “Dude just let go it's not even that high.”, said Kelly. “Just c’mon!”, yelled Kamaurion.“If he’s scared let‘em be scared.” uttered Keion’s dad and brother. “I’m not scared I just don’t fuck with heights or anything of that nature.” “That literally means your scared!”, Keion said frustratedly. “Fine I’m scared but that's besides the point.”, I said. Nigga that is the point!” “You right, fuck it I’ll go.”, I said …show more content…

“You know what I think this was bad idea let me take my ass back down with Trin and Mrs. F. ,I said anxiously. “NO!!” They all yelled. “So much for that idea”, I said to myself. As we got on the ride i muttered these words “ Lord I wanna be alive, I wanna be aliveeee, I don't wanna die today, So let me live to tell you why.” When the ride started everyone started cheering, screaming, and enjoying themselves. Me on the other hand was enjoying myself, but I was enjoying it from the depths of my mind. Once again my body was petrified. My lips were numb, and my body wouldn't move an inch until I got off the ride. “Did you even breathe?” Mr. Flenoid asked me. “Not once.” I said in shock. As we were going to the next ride The Ninja me and the guys stop and turned back as 2 beautiful girls walked past us. “What the hell y’all stop for?” Mr. Flenoid said curiously. “Cause of them 2 girls that just past us.” Mrs. Flenoid said eagerly. “Ion know why can’t none of them get they numbers.” Mr. Flenoid said confidently. “Who???!!” Kelly and I blurted. “Y’all heard me.” Mr. Flenoid said being as cocky ever. “You take the one with the long hair I get the thick one?” I asked. “Bet” “Let’go then.” I said confidently. So once it was our turn to ride The Ninja we both sat next to the girl of our choosing. “I’m a bit scared you mind if we hold hands?” I say. She chuckles “Sure”. As the ride went up on the slope I

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