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Jamie Nabozny Thesis Statement

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Alana Brockman #6
Periods 3/4
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Ignoring Bullies
(Topic Sentence) Bullying can happen to anyone and be completely ignored. (Background Info) Jamie Nabozny from Ashland, Wisconsin was bullied throughout middle school and high school for his sexual orientation. To emphasize, this constant harassment ended up making Nabozny run away from home twice and end up in the hospital from physical attacks of the bullies. His school district ignored this constant harassment until a lawsuit occurred. (Attention Grabber) In the hospital, Jamie recollected the bullies saying “You tell anybody, I’ll kill you.” These words kept Mr. Nabozny from reporting the assault and hiding it away from anyone for a while. Then, he tells someone, despite …show more content…

(Thesis Statement) Jamie Nabozny, a kid bullied for his sexual orientation, bravely fought against and district that would not …show more content…

(Evidence) He shows this strength to continue when he is beaten badly enough that the injuries take him to the hospital. The bullies scarred Nabozny physically and emotionally when they said, “If you say anything I will kill you”. (Elaboration) Similarly, many students who are bullied lose the will to live and do not want to attend school anymore. These frightened students are worried to talk about their encounters; despite the fact that, help might be given to them. The bully victim’s perseverance to have a better life leads him to a community health center in Minneapolis. Nabozny refused to give in to the tormentation of the bullies and wanted to have a better bully-free life. He gained the knowledge to make a lawsuit against the district. (Explanation) Sometimes people in high positions do not always do what it right; however, their job entitles it. (Significance) This shows that he had perseverance and wanted to give the people a run for their money and stand up for himself. He rose up like a phoenix from the ashes(Figurative Language) and showed that anything is possible and that bullying should not occur and should be stopped

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