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Diction In Poetry

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Poetry, like any art, is in the eye of the beholder. An artist uses texture and color to create a masterpiece that could have any number of meanings, just like a poet uses diction and rhyme to give meaning to their poetry. A. E. Housman’s word choices in his work entitled On Moonlit Heath and Lonesome Bank forces the reader to pay careful attention to take a deeper look into the mind of the poet and really grasp at the author’s message and tone toward the very serious topic of hanging as a capital punishment. As the first stanza opens on what seems to be a tranquil and peaceful setting, it soon becomes clear that not all is what it seems. The narrator, who begins by introducing grazing sheep, takes a sudden left turn by telling us readers that the gallows used to be right here “fast” by the railroad tracks. His use of the word fast could hide a double meaning; he could have used other perfectly sound terms such as close or near, but he chose fast, possibly implying that society was quick to kill and resort to hanging as a way of death. This sad mood continues throughout the next stanza through personification as the trains …show more content…

“A careless shepherd once would keep his flocks by moonlight there.”(5-8) The footnote at the end of the poem refers to keeping sheep by moonlight as a euphemism for hanging in chains, which implies that the flock is a metaphor for prisoners that are meant to be put to death. This quote also serves as an allusion to a passage in the Bible, “the shepherd watched over their flocks by night.” The “careless shepherd” from the poem is nothing more than a clueless society that thinks highly enough of themselves to play God; they disregard the innocence of the men, for sheep are a symbol of innocence, further demonstrating the author’s point that death by hanging is not something that we have the authority to put onto

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