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Archie Weller's Short Story 'Herbie'

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Archie Weller’s short story, Herbie, is certainly well structured, well written and thought provoking. The author cleverly portrayed his information with the intentional use of strong coarse language, realistic settings, daringly vicious dialogues and powerful imagery – but all these elements successfully play their parts in making “Herbie” a compelling read. The story is a recount of bullying, told from the point of view of Davy Morne, who describes himself as one of the worst of the bullies. The victim is Herbie, the only indigenous kid at the school, who is brutally bullied for being noticeably different; because he has strong Indigenous features. He is described, “as black as a crow,” imagery which reinforces this difference, as does the language in words like “Boong”, “Nigger” and “Abo”, words which appear in the opening sentences, grabbing the reader’s shocked attention and compelling the reader to continue because how can anyone get away with such brazenly, racist language. Archie Weller excelled throughout the course of this story in his use of imagery: every sentence carried a vivid imagination, from the description of Herbie, his bullies or his torture and all this was cleverly done from the point of view of young Davy Morne. …show more content…

This is evident in the beginning sentence of the story in which we see herbie being described with strong racial terms. Language was also used to support the structure. Opening or ending paragraphs could create tension and suspense in the reader’s mind. Beginning sentences like “Then came the day I aren’t never going to forget” or “once we went too far” reinforces this as that sentence alone could cause a million predictions in the reader’s mind, after all the atrocious torture handed out to herbie, what could this possibly be? One thing was certain, it would be the

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