Marlee Sue Bradley
Dr. Jaime Cantrell
ENG 307
29 September 2016
“My Words are Powerful”: Deconstructive Analysis of Coal Audre Lorde’s poem, Coal, explores the idea of repression and the freedom of speech. On first reading of the text, the poem seems to be built around an idea of anger towards repressing one’s individual thoughts and not voicing personal opinion. However, through a deconstructive reading, there are inconsistencies within the text’s language that question whether the speaker is referring to the forceful repression of spoken words or other motifs like femininity, power and self worth within an individual’s voice. By examining the verbal, textual, and linguistic stages of Coal, one can see the contradictions, discontinuities, and unreliability in relation to one another within the poem. As mentioned above, when Coal is examined at a verbal level, the poem contains contradictions between the signified and the signifier. One paradox originates from the poem’s conflict between the feelings expressed and the feelings proposed. The speaker describes the feeling of repression within the poem. This proposal of repression seems to originate from an external source, as if the speaker is being forced to keep her ideas and thoughts to herself. However, when examined closer, this professed feeling of restraint has disunity between what the speaker is actually trying to convey. In the second stanza, the speaker uses harsh language to contradict a feeling of
However, the poem has fluidity despite its apparent scarcity of rhyme. After examining the alteration of syllables in each line, a pattern is revealed in this poem concerning darkness. The first nine lines alternate between 8 and 6 syllables. These lines are concerned, as any narrative is, with exposition. These lines set up darkness as an internal conflict to come. The conflict intensifies in lines 10 and 11 as we are bombarded by an explosion of 8 syllables in each line. These lines present the conflict within one's own mind at its most desperate. After this climax, the syllables in the last nine lines resolve the conflict presented. In these lines, Dickinson presents us with an archetypal figure that is faced with a conflict: the “bravest” hero. These lines present the resolution in lines that alternate between 6 and 7 syllables. Just as the syllables decrease, the falling action presents us with a final insight. This insight discusses how darkness is an insurmountable entity that, like the hero, we must face to continue “straight” through “Life” (line 20).
Now that you have read the poem and considered the meanings of the lines, answer the following questions in a Word doc or in your assignment window:
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