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Wait But Why Analysis

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At this time of the year, while everybody is so ready for Christmas break and vacation, I’m facing a nightmare called “tomorrow is due day". I was so relaxed and subjective the whole week that I don't have any initiative or what I'm going to write for my final paper. Suddenly, an “idea bulb” popped up in my head and lightened. I decided to explore my problem : procrastinating. After 2 hours researching in the library which seems like a decade to me, I finally found a 9-million-views speech “Inside the mind of a master procrastinator” by Tim Urban who immediately motivated me through this talk. Graduated from Harvard University, Tim Urban is now a blog-writer, also an illustrator of “Wait But Why” site where he writes posts about life, happiness, …show more content…

Likewise, Urban clarified his message of “don't let the animal control your brain because it lives entirely in the present moment he has no memory of the past, no knowledge of the future and he only cares about two things easy and fun”. With a creative and funny visual aid, his idea of procrastination are transferred fluently to the audience. Wording is the most important factors that comp I students usually skip. To make it sounds professional, students choose to have advanced language like medical term or biological name which is actually a mistake. Wording your speech clearly and comprehensibly will increase the rhetoric of the speech. If wording is too advanced and hard to understand, then writers has failed in using logos. It means, the writing won't sound logical and explicit. So this is such a great example for Comp 1 student to avail their speech.
The tone of “Inside the mind of a master procrastinator” is replaced the most since the 10th minute till the end. Tim cleverly change audience's insight about procrastination. The speech illustrate the stick figure and monkey into real life situation when there's no deadline at all. Since he asks the question “What procrastination has done to my life?”, he brings a realistic insight into audience’s mind and they change from comfortable feelings at first to serious and mindful about the problem at

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