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Snow: A Narrative Fiction

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If she wasn’t in the snow, she knew her hands would still be shaking, she had to win. As the pistol was fired up the air, she pushed off with her poles and shot onto the groomed track. The sharp rush of wind pierced her skin like a thousand sharp knives as she bolted down the slope with her ski. Her trophy cabinet was prepared to invite the new glimmering piece of appreciation that she was sure to get her hands on. Crowds were cheering behind the fences, all pushing each other to get to the front and see the action. The grassy mountain in the summer with daisies and buttercups was now covered in snow. Elbowing her competitors she tried to push and make her way to the front. Unfortunately she just wasn’t quick enough, the others zoomed off and …show more content…

As the flag came closer and closer in view, it morphed into a rectangular-shaped "danger cliff" sign. She had no time to halt, before her body was viciously thrown into mid-air and slammed into what looked like the gentle snow; but was instead hard, rough ground; narrowly missing a group of knife-like jagged rocks below her. Whimpering in pain, she lifted her head to see miles upon miles of what looked like "cookies and cream ice-cream," rocks and snow. Black mingled in sparkling white, white disappearing into the abyss. There was an absence of footsteps, the wind even fearing to venture down into the icy hell that she had plummeted into. Even the birds above her were now soaring overhead, mocking her as if waiting for her death. Minutes felt like years as she lay sprawled out in the snow. Any moment now her prince would arrive on the top of the jagged edge unravelling a rope for her to climb up to safety in his waiting arms, or a helicopter would send down a basket for her to be lifted into and bring her back to the land of the living. But these were all dreams and hopes. As she drifted off into the land of eternal sleep, she wished she hadn’t taken that

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