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Personal Narrative-It's Time To Pick-Up !

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Wow! As hot as it is, our cross country team prepares to participate in a plank competition. Doing planks is like doing push-ups, but without going up or down. People seem ready to start, sweaty from the work-out, and look ready to do hardcore. The sun beams and shines through the trees, as the wind breezes by. Many girls remain ready in plank position as the coach gets ready to set the timer. Before the timer starts, she says, “We can all do at least 45 seconds’’. Finally, she says, “One..two..three..Up!’’. In the beginning, I feel calm and continent, as my thoughts drift back to the competition.While the seconds turn into minutes, girls gradually drop to the ground like shooting rockets. Minutes pass away, and I start to shake a bit. Little …show more content…

Finally, the other girl and I, are still staying up. Girls screaming and cheering me on like a laughing hyena, making the only option left, beat the high school record. I already knew that the high school record remains sixteen minutes. “How many minutes has it been?’’ “12 minutes,’’ “4 minutes to beat the high school record!’’ Finally, my body started to lower a bit closer to the ground. But my friends kept yelling and screaming, motivating me,to stay up .Soon enough, my legs shake like in winter when I have shorts on instead of snow pants. My stomach starts joining the shaking along with my legs. The girls keep saying,”Don’t let a 6th grader beat you!’’ So I keep going even though I just really want to flop down on the floor and quit. Because of my friends, I keep going, so I couldn’t let them down. I knew if I did flop down it wouldn’t be worth …show more content…

So I ask if I should be done or not, but sadly not. So I stay up, while I hear the coach say, “3..2..1..DOWN!’’ I drop down to satisfaction and happiness as people cheer for me. As I stand up, my legs feel funny, as well as my back. My elbows are red and full of scratching pain. The gleeful team feels proud and full of amazement. “Augh, my back!’’For many days, when I sit up from laying down, I will feel a moment of unforgiving pain, as if I feel like someone is stabbing me with a knife. At the same time, my elbows feel the painful pressure, that feels like a rug burn. I couldn’t believe that I broke the high school record by two minutes! So my own record remains eighteen minutes..Try

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