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Personal Narrative Analysis

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It was a day that I had been waiting for all season, why? Because it meant that the pain was going to be over and it was my final race to prove how good I really was to everyone and hopefully fulfill the goal my coach, school and fans set for me. That morning of October 28th I woke up really sick to my stomach. Nerves were taking over my body and I couldn't sit still. The ride to the course I remember putting my headphones in and zoning everything out and never truly coming out of it till after the race was over. I remember my mom hugging me and telling me how proud of me she was and that no matter how bad my shins hurt to keep running. My coach grabbed me before I went to the starting line and surprisingly said how proud he was of me too, but that it wasn't over so that could change. It was so cold outside and I remember being able to see my breath and worrying that it was going to really effect my performance. I could also see the …show more content…

I made it close to the front and mentally prepared myself for the pain I was about to ender. My body kept telling me to just stop, but my mind and competitiveness wouldn't let me quit that easy. As I came around a turn I looked up at this giant hill I had to climb and my shins screamed “please no”. When I got to the top the climb down was even worse but I continued to push myself. I finally reached the last stretch of the course and broke out in a full on sprint. This was my favorite part of every race because I couldn't feel anything and it was almost like I was flying. The crowd cheering as I pass the competitors who are too tired to finish strong. My legs feeling like jello but somehow are moving the fastest they ever have and I actually feel good. Sweat flowing down my face and sharp pain attacking my shins and yet I continued to run as fast as I could. When I finally got to the end I felt relief and a sense of accomplishment and all the pain just

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