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My Writing Experience

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Writing has continuously served as a getaway in my life. It has kept me from bottling up my thoughts and emotions and has allowed me to express all of these things on paper. Communicating through speaking has always been a weakness of mine. It is for this reason that I often turn to writing to convey my feelings. Though have such an immense passion for free-writing, I have found myself struggling when comes to writing academic papers. Generally, I enjoy writing when it is something that I am interested in. In Composition I and II, I often have had the opportunity to choose the topic that I write my paper on. I am confident that this has been a major turning point for me within my academic essays. Ultimately, Composition I and II have taught …show more content…

Prior to Composition I, I felt very uneasy about my writing ability. My high school’s English classes were very focused on literature rather than writing. This was quite concerning for me because I knew that my writing techniques and essays needed to be top-notch when applying to prestigious colleges. Before Composition I, I did not fully understand how to utilize commas and periods. I consistently was writing with run-on sentences. My first paper in Composition I, “The Falling Man” is a prime example of this. This paper was an evaluative essay and in my first paragraph I stated, “However, he is acknowledged as one of the trapped victims on the upper floors of the skyscraper who had two options- to fall searching for safety or jump to escape the massive amounts …show more content…

In addition, I have learned how to properly changeover to a new topic. Throughout my papers in Composition I, I would jump around from topic to topic. My paragraphs were not organized and they did not contain smooth transitions. In the second paper I wrote in Composition I, named “Body Shaming: A Severe Affair” I began my paper by introducing an author from a source I used. This is an improper way to start an essay as I most likely confused the reader. I should have included background information or a topic sentence. Right away, I expressed, “Hobbs, a contributing editor for the Deseret Morning News states in “When ‘Likes’ Harm Body Image” that she's not the only one who believes such constant social media feeds can be damaging to women” (1). Again, my final research paper in Composition II, “Why Barbie Influences Body Image?” is a great example of my improvements with this problem. Beginning my paragraph, I declared, “Equally important, it is essential to recognize how prevalent negative body images are in the United States” (4). This is well-written because I referred to the last paragraph while announcing the topic for the paragraph to come. As shown between my paper from Composition I and Composition II, I believe I have worked hard to create papers that flow and are easy for the reader to

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