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Michael J. Romick's Totally Tuned In

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Eighth grade. I can honestly tell you that I have learn almost nothing in academic, but that would only stretch the true. I cannot truly remember what went on exactly in eighth grade, but I can specifically remember my English class, a place of hopelessness. My English at the time of eighth grade was not the best nor was it the worst, however I did struggle in English the most. My experience in eighth grade was not the same as Michael J. Romick, his was a much more learning compare to mine. Romick was engaged for the first time in academics, the moment he had heard the combination of poetry with music he had become stunned. His experience with those combination were written in his article Totally Tuned In. In this article Romick starts from the moment he finds interest in academic through music, which was in eighth grade. Moving on the years, he finds himself in high school applying those same concepts in his class. That is when he emphasize the use of music to hook the young minds, just as …show more content…

Still he use English as a common subject to relate to those whom second language is English, hence creating a relatable subject for us to connect. He is using school are a common relation to connect to us, yet most people cannot relate to it unless they have struggle academically, and this is who I believe he is trying to appeal to. However, why use a school experience as an introduction? As I continue to read on, I realize that this whole article is concerning academics, which is why he use his experiences in school as a platform for his argument. With this in mind, he uses more of ethos, with is experience, to persuade the reader, along with a few pathos. I believe that his evidence to support his idea was not as strong as it should be. However, his introduction does serve a strong purpose as a source of connection with the

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