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How Does Jefferson Use Syntax In The Declaration Of Independence

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Representative for Virginia, Thomas Jefferson, in his draft of the Declaration of Independence, argues that the colonies had the right to break away from British rule. Jefferson’s purpose is to state the many reasons the colonies had that led them to make that decision. He writes in a formal tone using parallelism and strong diction and syntax that appeal to pathos in order to help the king understand why the colonies chose to declare independence. Throughout the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson used parallelism to make his argument more effective. One example of parallelism is seen in the sentence, “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal... it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish …show more content…

Parallelism is shown by the continual use of the word "for" and by the similar length and structure of each sentence. The parallelism here …show more content…

His appeal to pathos can be seen in the statement, “He has plundered our seas, ravaged our Coasts, burnt our towns, and destroyed the lives of our people.” Jefferson’s choice of words appeal to the reader’s emotions and cause them to feel resentment towards the king’s actions. His diction and syntax also appeal to pathos in the sentence, “Mercenaries to compleat the works of death, desolation and tyranny, already begun with circumstances of Cruelty & perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head of a civilized nation.” In this statement, Jefferson mentions that the king of Britain is undeserving to rule the colonies because of his brutality. Once again, he uses a series of negative terms to describe the king’s actions in order to force the reader to feel enraged and become more understanding of the colonies’ decision to break away from British rule. Thomas Jefferson’s appeal to pathos through his word choice can also be seen in the sentence, “A Prince whose character is thus marked by every act which may define a Tyrant, is unfit to be the ruler of a free people.” In this statement, Jefferson compares the king to a tyrant. The colonies wanted more freedom, however, under British control they had little to no rights. By calling the king a tyrant, Jefferson appeals to the reader’s emotions and causes them to feel more anger

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