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Evelyn-Personal Narrative

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I’ll never forget the first time I saw Evelyn. My family and I had recently moved from a city backdrop painted with bright lights and packed with cars to a suburb that seemed to sprawl into an infinity of concrete and well-tended lawns. Used to the constant noise that comes with living in a place jam-packed, the quiet here seemed unnerving. I wanted to disturb the comfort of the day, to send a flock of birds flying at the sound of my voice, to be heard. My mother sent me out of our new house to “get some fresh air”, but I knew I was just in the way of settling into our new home. I snorted. Home. As if. Call me pessimistic, but this place was just going to be another pit stop before Dad’s job required him to pack us up again. Sighing, I …show more content…

“Well, you did say it was a good movie!” whined Evelyn. “You’ll be okay as long as I’m here,” I reassured her. She smiled her perfect smile, and I thanked the darkness for concealing my heated face. As light from the television illuminated the room, I studied Evelyn’s face, which was sallow in the white glow. Her eyes were squinted in concentration, as if she were determined not to be afraid this time. I’d never noticed how long her nose was until now. It was actually kind of cute, the way it protruded at the tip just a little. Stop thinking like that, I scolded myself. I’ll get hurt anyway. She probably has a boyfriend. Have we ever talked about stuff like boys? “AHH!!” she shrieked, grabbing onto my arm in fear. Quickly snapped out of my thoughts, I chuckled and rubbed her back comfortingly until she was once again captivated. I sighed quietly to myself, the longing escaping from my chest and into the open. I wished there could be more between us, that I didn’t have to fear how much I loved Evelyn. My sigh seemed to reach Evelyn’s ears, for she turned to me quizzically, her head turned as if to say, what’s wrong? She leaned over for the remote and paused it while I stared down into my …show more content…

She had no idea at all. Should I tell her? Fear gripped my throat in a chokehold, preventing me from speaking. “Hey,” she crooned, “you can tell me anything.” I smiled grimly. Is that so? “Val? Val! You’re crying!” I felt warm tears slide down my cheeks, spilling the emotions I could never voice. “I’m sorry, Evelyn,” I sobbed, burying my face in my hands. Why? Why did I have to ruin this night? It was supposed to be a fun time, not filled with the stupid drama in my head. “I haven’t been completely honest with you about myself,” I began. Evelyn furrowed her brow in confusion. I hadn’t been very open to begin with, but over time, I had started to share more of my visions with her. “The thing is, even though it hasn’t been a long time – only two months, about – I have fallen in love with you.” The silence was an anvil on my chest, an iron grip on my throat, a rush of butterflies in my stomach. “Val…I- I don’t know what to say,” Evelyn

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