I am writing to you to let you know what I learned in your ENG 120 class. One of my goals is to be more descriptive when using words and write my paragraphs with quality content. Writing is hard for most people because it requires a lot of focus and discipline. I now can write my paragraphs with more descriptive details to better help the readers understand what is happening. For example, we wrote the memoir that needed lots of details to set up the scene for the readers. When I first wrote my memoir near the end, I explained how I was impacted by saving that patient's life which was rather telling than showing. Additionally, I struggled without using precise words in my sentences. Usually, my brain always comes up with the simpler and general …show more content…
For example, from writing a memoir to the rhetorical analysis, the audience changed and it was a different genre. In the memoir, the audience was whoever read my paper, but for the commentary it changed into an audience of people who are looking for information on why the minimum legal age should stay at 21. That was a hard concept to wrap my head around, now I feel as I could write any kind of paper taking into account differences in audience, purpose, and genre. Another example on how I purposed my writing to offer advice and had two different audiences is in the commentary. In my commentary, I wrote to not only people that want to know more about the legal drinking age but also gave facts and statistics on to why the minimum legal drinking age should stay at …show more content…
I chose to revise it because I wanted to make some sentences more clear to the readers of the letter. For example, I wrote, “The advertisement shows that they need this product and attracts women.” into “The advertisement shows that Old Spice makes the man think that they need this product to attract women. I fixed the wordiness in the sentence because the sentences were not that clear to the readers that were reading my paper and it helped my writing sound more polished and sophisticated. Another example in the rhetorical analysis is that I wrote, “The Old Spice advertisements are effective in selling their products by giving an ideal image of how a man should be and how they should smell by using ethos, and moving woman emotionally by using pathos and logos, and by making a sexual theme that grabs the audience's attention using pathos. I changed it to “The Old Spice commercial, “The Man Your Man Could Smell Like,” uses the power of gender stereotypes, humor, and the use of rhetorical strategies, such as ethos and pathos, to connect with the audience and convince them to switch to Old Spice. Even though Old spice commercials are not very logical or statistics to back up the things that they claim, they use pathos by playing with the audience’s emotion thorough sex appeal, which is highly effective.” By putting more precise words in my sentences and changing the sentences into sentences that are more
From elementary school to high school, I was taught that my writing had to be structured and follow strict criteria. After I arrived in Mr. Mukherjee’s ENG 102 class, I was given the opportunity to express my creative freedom through words and graphical pictures. It can often be difficult and challenging to improve upon my own writing abilities unless motived with an idea in mind. When looking back on my time at ASU, I thought about the goals that I wanted to address for myself and the course goals that my instructor had set for the class. These goals include ones that I had accomplished to the best of my ability and ones that I need to address as well as improve.
At the start of this course, I wasn’t sure what to expect. I had a goal for myself to improve and learn skills that would make writing less daunting for me. I have learned so many things about my writing that I didn’t think much about before. Another goal I had was to break the cookie-cutter mold that was set upon me throughout high school. During the process of revision, I discovered many things about myself as a writer and techniques that have been effective for me in the writing process.
Throughout my time writing at the City College of New York, I experienced a slow and dramatic transition to my first semester of this college course. During that time, I've learned from several feedback and lessons from certain peers and my professor. Because of the strict comments written in my drafts by my professor, a few helpful suggestions to include in my writing, and a few miserably failures, I was able to see how my writing and habits have changed during the duration of this course. Back in high school, I was always comfortable writing only five paragraph essays (Introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion), but I've never expected to write something more complex. Here, I was encouraged to include as much detail as I can instead of writing something vague
In reference to this element, Lindemann differentiates the terms by describing the reader as the person that deciphers a message while the audience is mentioned to be the target of a writing piece. In addition, Lindemann includes a broader definition of audience with the input of authors Lisa Ede and Andrea Lunsford. In general, I agree with Ede and Lunsford on the importance of the relationship between readers and writers. It is crucial for a writer to know his/her target before putting in paper a rhetorical piece. As Lindemann mentions, most of the students write their papers considering their teacher as their only audience. Therefore, I believe it would be a good practice to start imagining a broader audience to persuade with our writing assignments to acquire the skill of targeting different audiences to become better
The art of writing is a complex and difficult process. Proper writing requires careful planning, revision, and proofreading. Throughout the past semester, the quality of my writing has evolved significantly. At first, I struggled with the separation of different types of paragraphs, and I found writing them laborious. Constant practice, however, has eliminated many of my original difficulties, and helped to inspire confidence in my skills. As a collegiate writer, my strength lies in my clear understanding of the fundamentals of writing, while my primary weakness is proofreading my own work.
While the theme of ENGL 105 with Dr. Rowland is What We Do When We Read, I found the course’s effect on my writing to be the most beneficial result of taking this course. I learned how to formulate and transcribe an argument in an efficient manner. This is not to say that I did not also enjoy learning about various topics relating to the mental phenomena that occur when I read literature.
Starting my ENG101 class, I felt like it was the basics of learning grammar and English material from high school. However, I quickly learned that I needed to brush-up on some of my writing skills. I acquired skills of the past, as well as some new ones. Writing may still be slightly confusing to me when using correct punctuation, run-on sentences, and organizing my thoughts. Learning to use an outline, create a topic to answer questions, and brainstorming has taught me to become a better writer.
It is essential to understand that classes taken in grade school do not give students a full understanding of each subject. With the topic of writing, there will always be a new lesson to learn, an aspect to improve, or a differing way to explain. Author Craig Vetter states in Bonehead Writing, “This is your enemy: a perfectly empty sheet of paper. Nothing will ever happen here except what you make happen.” Each story, essay, or response comes from a writer’s experiences. With each attempt at a new piece comes an underlying story of emotions the writer is facing. Each person’s writing is unique and the ideas people have are related to their past experiences and what they believe to be familiar with when deciding which writing style to use. As a high school student, I have learned many things about writing that helped me become the improved writer I am today, but the most essential advice I have received is practice makes perfect. Although there is no actual perfect way of writing, I have discovered that each essay I write, my writing improves. It is easier to spot mistakes, find areas to improve, and ponder elevated word choice to use.
Looking back through all of the assignments, I find out that I have achieved the goal in becoming a better writer. Take a look at my first draft for this class, on Details: Physical Senses, my writing was totally lack of details and it was uninteresting. For example, the opening of my draft, “There is a large fish pond in my hometown. ” I was shocked when I went back and read this draft. This draft was totally lacking of detailed descriptions, and detailed descriptions are very important for the audience to create a vivid image when they are reading the description. However, after your lectures, on Details: Tone and Attitude, Telescoping(zoom in on the subject), Appositive(bring clarity to abstract terms through definition) and Freighting (capture complex and compound reading), I have grown as a writer. I understood the idea that too many short sentences will pause the reader’s
While attending writing class, I learned about the 4 steps in writing, bases for revising, organizing, and connecting specific information, and I also learned about the different types of essays such as descriptive, narrative, process, cause and effect and argumentative essay. I have been a student at Milwaukee Area Technical College for 1 semester, and over the course of my enrollment I have grown and learned more that I knew prior to attending this writing course. Participating in this writing class has taught me so much more than stuff about literature and language, it has taught me another way of expressing myself. I have learned here how to write and express myself, how to think for myself, and how to find the answers to the things that I don 't know. Most importantly I have learned how important technique, outlines and organization are. My goal in this paper is to inform writers about how my writing skills have improved.
A learner’s ability to communicate effectively through writing to his/her target audiences is a major prerequisite for academic success. It is also a major pillar of success in one’s career across all areas of practice. Even though, writing clearly is critical to one’s academic and career success, I have not always loved writing. In fact, for a long time I despised writing. At one point, I had a feeling that my writings skills were bound to remain stagnated throughout my life. However, time has proven that I was wrong. My attitude and outlook towards virtually all genres of writing has changed positively. The various helpful methods I have been exposed to by my English teachers through different grades have helped me
Like transforming from a caterpillar to a butterfly, my writing style transformed from something mediocre to something quite exceptional. In high school, even when I took advanced placement English and Literature courses, I was never good at writing. My writing would lack structure, reasoning, syntax, and a well-defined thesis statement. My inadequate grades on writing assignments lowered my self-esteem, so I assumed I would never enjoy writing papers because I believed I could never improve. However, since attending a university my writing style has improved far beyond my expectation. My EN 101 course enhanced my understanding of the different ways I could approach my writing. Also, it enhanced my comprehension of outlines to complete assignments. Investing quality time into my writing made a substantial difference because I became a stronger writer. Through the late nights, constant revisions, and agonizing head traumas, I learned that my writing is truly spectacular whenever I incorporate well-defined thesis statements, provide sufficient supporting evidence, and maintain a clear focus in my assignments.
Writing is way that we can express ourselves, it is a way to interface ideas and thoughts and to prove a point. Throughout my writing experience or process I have struggled with writing especially using details or really expressing myself my work. In this course Facts & Fiction: Portraits in World Art I expect to gain more knowledge on how to write a perfect essay, story, letter, and assignment. I expect to learn new genres and rhetorical situations. I also think my writing will improve academically and I will develop my skills in writing. Also taking my writing to a different point of view, level, and writing something different rather than the usual. I look forward to getting feedback from my peers and learning their thoughts on my writing and how they can help me improve.
Over the course of this past semester, my ability to write has improved tremendously. Prior to undertaking this course, my expertise in writing was not as fine-tuned as it should have been. I had never previously been enrolled in a class specifically tailored to writing-- which was quite clear. Upon reading my past works, it becomes apparent that my writing style consisted of fluff, small words, and inconsistently structured sentences. These problems have, for the most part, been remedied with the coursework I have tackled in College Writing. Rather than long, drawn out papers that take an eternity to reach the primary point, my recent work is much nicer in terms of composition and grammar. I credit these improvements to the three primary
Over the course of the semester, there has been numerous amount of areas where I believe I have improved in comparison to high school. What has helped me in my writing is the writing class and the in-class writing workshop. The writing class that is located in the Kremen education building has helped me with my writing greatly because in the writing center the person in charge teach us lenses and we apply those lenses to the writing, draft, or reading that someone brings in. The in-class writing workshop has helped me because other students get to read my writing. This is helpful because I get feedback from many students and they let me know what needs to be fixed. A new tool I have been using is They Say I Say. The book is very helpful because of the information and examples it provides such as the templates. I have been applying the templates into my essays and I have seen a significant difference.