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Eng 120 Reflection

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I am writing to you to let you know what I learned in your ENG 120 class. One of my goals is to be more descriptive when using words and write my paragraphs with quality content. Writing is hard for most people because it requires a lot of focus and discipline. I now can write my paragraphs with more descriptive details to better help the readers understand what is happening. For example, we wrote the memoir that needed lots of details to set up the scene for the readers. When I first wrote my memoir near the end, I explained how I was impacted by saving that patient's life which was rather telling than showing. Additionally, I struggled without using precise words in my sentences. Usually, my brain always comes up with the simpler and general …show more content…

For example, from writing a memoir to the rhetorical analysis, the audience changed and it was a different genre. In the memoir, the audience was whoever read my paper, but for the commentary it changed into an audience of people who are looking for information on why the minimum legal age should stay at 21. That was a hard concept to wrap my head around, now I feel as I could write any kind of paper taking into account differences in audience, purpose, and genre. Another example on how I purposed my writing to offer advice and had two different audiences is in the commentary. In my commentary, I wrote to not only people that want to know more about the legal drinking age but also gave facts and statistics on to why the minimum legal drinking age should stay at …show more content…

I chose to revise it because I wanted to make some sentences more clear to the readers of the letter. For example, I wrote, “The advertisement shows that they need this product and attracts women.” into “The advertisement shows that Old Spice makes the man think that they need this product to attract women. I fixed the wordiness in the sentence because the sentences were not that clear to the readers that were reading my paper and it helped my writing sound more polished and sophisticated. Another example in the rhetorical analysis is that I wrote, “The Old Spice advertisements are effective in selling their products by giving an ideal image of how a man should be and how they should smell by using ethos, and moving woman emotionally by using pathos and logos, and by making a sexual theme that grabs the audience's attention using pathos. I changed it to “The Old Spice commercial, “The Man Your Man Could Smell Like,” uses the power of gender stereotypes, humor, and the use of rhetorical strategies, such as ethos and pathos, to connect with the audience and convince them to switch to Old Spice. Even though Old spice commercials are not very logical or statistics to back up the things that they claim, they use pathos by playing with the audience’s emotion thorough sex appeal, which is highly effective.” By putting more precise words in my sentences and changing the sentences into sentences that are more

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