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Dialectical Journal Essay

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Paragraph 1 tone : He seems nervous about this trip He says ,“We’ve all been up since midnight, starting our predive checks after a couple of restless hours of sleep, and the whole team is running on adrenaline. These are the roughest conditions I’ve dived in so far on the expedition” The way he says that they’ve been up the whole night doing checks without sleep and how this is one of the roughest conditions he has dived in so far just gives the sense of nervousness if he will make the challenge. Paragraph 4: Revise- “But right now I feel surprisingly calm” My body is tightly snugged,comfortably within the bright green sub and my breath is calmly,steady. Paragraph 6: It’s meant to show to times in history he is traveling that depth to0. …show more content…

He loses function of the arms and door, with the only thing working is the camera. Paragraph 24: impression of the dive & how does he do it? He says it’s an accomplishment that he came and discovered the bottom of the ocean. It’s like another world being discovered except that there is nothing that lives in it like the other seafloors he has visited. Cameron does it by describing his feelings, “But I have the inescapable feeling that I’ve dived beyond the limits of life itself. And with that comes an awe, a sense of the great privilege of being here, of bearing witness to a primordial world.” Compare tone of final paragraph to intro paragraph and use examples He seems nervous about this trip He says ,“We’ve all been up since midnight, starting our predive checks after a couple of restless hours of sleep, and the whole team is running on adrenaline. These are the roughest conditions I’ve dived in so far on the expedition” The way he says that they’ve been up the whole night doing checks without sleep and how this is one of the roughest conditions he has dived in so far just gives the sense of nervousness if he will make the challenge. In the last paragraph he is relieved and happy he made the mission to Mariana’s Trench and says, “A feeling of relief washes over me as the numbers get progressively lower. I’m on my way back to the world of sunlight and air, and Suzy’s sweet

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