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Brush Fire Analysis

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Writer , Linda Thomas, in her essay, Brush Fire, discusses the Santa Ana winds experienced in Southern California and how it affects the people and the weather. Well-known essayist , Joan Didion, in her essay, The Santa Ana, describes the winds and the effects it has on the way the people behave. Both Thomas and Didion’s essays have a similar subject and circumstance, the Santa Ana winds but, both essays vary in numerous ways. The details, tone, and how the message is being told are ways in which both essays differ. These essays are an example of one topic being portray through different lights.
In Brush Fire, Thomas begins to convey recollected memories of a day on which she experienced the Santa Ana winds. She tells the details in chronological order starting from the moment she woke up and ended in the present tense. Thomas stated, “I know this because this morning I awoke to air so dry that the graze of my nightgown against the down comforter created tiny orange sparks”(Thomas). Thomas ended with a different tense from which she began her essay. She said, “We are here to watch the orange flames color the sunset.”(Thomas). She also included details that incite imagery while talking about the environment of southern California by saying, “Chaparral is gorgeously beautiful--from the crooked red-brown wood… the sturdy shaft of yucca… with spikes of creamy blossom, to brilliant orange threads of dodder vine.”(Thomas). Didion also uses imagery but unlike Thomas, Didion conveys the imagery using the future tense. Didion states, “... we will see smoke back in the canyons, and hear sirens in the night”(Didion). The difference in the way that both essays begin to unfold resonate in the tense that is used. Tone plays an important role in how the message of each essay is being conveyed. This tone of both essays is one way in which they differ. Thomas uses a calm, poetic tone whereas Didion uses a more scientific and intellectual tone. Phrases in which the tone of Thomas’ text is revealed includes, “... I smell the odours of burning sagebrush, I can also… watch the flames lick up a hillside… a teenage couple… lost in embrace, passionate kisses no one seems to notice. We are hear to watch the orange flames color the

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