The way Tim Winton wrote was excellent and clever in the way he describes an uncomfortable surrounding but finds the good in it Although the way Tim Winton writes is very juxtaposition allowing you to reflect on the scenario, a good example of this is small mercies page 70 where Tim describes the swimming centre and how it was “damp and he felt a soupy chlorine feel”, once he started swimming he describes the air of every breath tasting of “sheep urine” but then he goes on to talk about the thing he enjoyed most, that was “the wind driven rain landing on his back”. The text describes an unpleasant experience but at the end he describes a pleasant yet satisfying breeze of wind landing on his back, the way he writes is very juxtaposition themed …show more content…
Tim Winton does this many times throughout his stories some good examples in small mercies is when Tim Winton writes about the Keenan’s as the salt of the earth meaning they are simple and good people, the term originated from Jesus Christ when he spoke to his followers saying “ye are the salt of the earth", another use of a simile in Tim Winton small mercies is when he describes the Keenan house smelling like “ old people" this is a simile because Tim Winton was comparing the odour of there house to old people. Tim Winton also says that the Keenan’s wood stove oven is the “Rolls-Royce of the ranges” this is a simile because he compares there oven to a high-end car. In damaged goods Tim uses simile throughout the book one example of this is when he is talking about when strawberry Alison came to town and how she was a beauty but she was “damaged goods" because of her large birthmark across her face, this is another good example as Tim talks about her looks as damaged goods this term comes from someone who is regarded as inadequate or impaired in some way this is a simile because damaged good means something that was good or valuable lost all value due to a little defect a good example is painting, it may be
A good story is always structured with details that are easy to follow while intriguing readers with reality and emotions. Edwidge Danticat’s memoir has proven her ability to use descriptions that allows the text and the readers to connect. Through her writing, she is able to get the reader involved in her situation, so that it is as if they are experiencing it too. Adding on, Danticat cleverly writes each type of description in a way that makes them distinct from each other. This connects the two which adds to her message. Descriptions bring life to her story and stresses the real events that happened to her and her family which displays her message effectively. That being said, without objective and subjective descriptions, any piece
Right near the beginning the author writes “Gusts of wind made bits of paper dance between the parked cars” which is an example of personification. This use of figurative language helps develop a gloomy mood and the fact neighborhood might be poor. Next the author writes “Father’s words like the distant thunder that now echoed through the streets of Harlem” which is an example of a simile. By comparing “Father’s” words to a distant thunder it makes the reader think his father is a big, strict, loud, and that the character and his father are probably in an argument. Finally, the author describes Lemon Brown’s voice as “high and brittle like twigs being broken” which is an example of a simile. By describing the voice as high and brittle it makes the reader think the voice may be from an older person who is potentially a woman. Walter Dean Myers makes great use of figurative language in the story Treasure of Lemon Brown.
This passage is a wonderful example of an opening description of setting. It fits into the structure of the novel by giving the audience a first look at the setting, using imagery and descriptive language to create a picture in the reader’s mind. The author begins using a comparison between hygienic modern bathrooms and the soldiers’ open view. He later uses personification when he writes, “The wind plays with our hair; it plays with our words and thoughts,” (Remarque 9). His calm and carefree diction adds to the peaceful mood.
Simile is a figure of speech which shows a similarity between two apparently unlike things by using the words “like” or “as.” One example of simile is, “The god that holds you over the pit of Hell much as one holds a spider, or some loathsome insect over the fire…” In this sentence you are being compared to a spider, or a loathsome insect. This means that God is holding you out of hell like someone would hold a bug over the trash. A second example of simile is, “your wickedness makes you as if it were as heavy as lead.” Your wickedness is being compared to lead. It is saying that you have so much sin and wickedness in you, that it weighs you down because it’s so heavy. The more wicked you get, the lower God’s hand drops, and the sooner you fall into
From the beginning of the story, Hunter sets the scene up and there is already a feeling of sympathy for Andy, the boy lying on the ground with the “wide gap in his flesh.”(Hunter 1), and the “rain drilling his jacket and drilling his body”(Hunter 1). The author is using very descriptive language in these two sentences to create a very horrific, but realistic sight in the reader's mind, inevitably building up a feeling of sadness for Andy. Towards the middle of the story, Andy still remains lying in the pouring rain with intense pain and Hunter describes Andy’s body as feeling “hot all over,”(5). This portrays very vivid image and feeling that the author intentionally creates in the reader. By using powerful imagery, the reader pictures and experiences a more realistic and moving image, creating lots of
In the movie Rain Man that was released in 1988 is about a character named Charlie Babbitt and his understanding of his brother Raymond Babbitt who suffers from autism.
For example, Bradbury writes “He would stride off, sending patterns of frosty air before him like the smoke of a cigar.” The simile used does a great job showing the reader the setting of this scene in the “The Pedestrian”. In this scene a man is walking down the sidewalk kicking up ash-like dust. When the reader sees the image of that man, the reader gets the sense of a content and tranquil situation.
When Wallace writes “…the air suffused with honeysuckle and lilacs both, which was almost too much” (1) readers can literally almost catch a whiff of the honeysuckle and lilacs in the air. Wallace’s precise and purposeful style of language allows us to get a true feeling for Lane, our protagonist, and the terror, desperation and nervousness he feels in making a horribly difficult decision. “He hated himself for sitting so frozen. He could almost visualize himself tiptoeing past something explosive. A big stupid-looking tiptoe, like in a cartoon. The whole last black week had been this way and it was wrong” (1) portrays the sheer terror and desperation that Lane is feeling. Wallace tells this story from a limited omniscience point of view, only allowing us into Lane’s head. This point of view complements Lane’s character as well as the tone of this story as it helps to set the frightened and worried mood of the story as it permits us, as readers, to experience the inner conflict and desperation that Lane is feeling. The setting, in my opinion, has hints of foreshadowing that work nicely with Lane’s inner conflict. When Wallace writes “[t]hey were up on a picnic table at that park by the lake, by the edge of the lake…” (1) the word “edge” prompts a feeling that the story is on the verge of change. When Wallace writes of “springtime” and “storms”, it provokes a feeling of newness and change. In my opinion, all of the literary elements in “Good
Hawthorne describes a cold and gray day. This description gives the reader a sense of isolation as well as slight depression. However, the mention of a slight breeze that ruffles the canopy of the forest just enough to let in little flickers of sunshine conveys a fleeting ray of hope that seems to coexist with the gloominess in the scene. In many scenes during the book, moods or prevailing feelings are established through descriptions of the natural surroundings of the characters. This aspect of Hawthorne's writing makes the book deeper and more emotional.
convey both the mood and meaning of the narrative. Irving creates a setting that is
Not only are the similes potentially overlooked, they also create a bigger problem in deterring readers from finding the more interesting themes, such as truth and loyalty, in the novel. If they skim over the similes, they will most likely skim over some of these important, and interesting, themes. His interactions with
In the play, descriptive language teaches the audience more about the surroundings than what the characters are actually saying to one another. "I've not been in this house--it's more than a year" (6), Mrs. Hale tells the county attorney. It is a very run down house, and the audience discovers there are no signs of anyone really ever being happy. The kitchen is dirty, and the women begin to feel uneasy about being in a house where there is nothing but darkness and coldness. The darkness is to signify how alone and empty Mrs. Wright was feeling while living with her husband. Mrs. Wright did not feel wanted, and she felt like all hope was lost which the audience recognizes with the help of Mrs. Hale's saying, "...he was a hard man, Mrs. Peters. Just to pass the time of day with him. Like a raw wind that gets to the bone" (11). Mrs. Hale conveys these important details to Mrs. Peters, which proves that the environment in the Wright house was dark and dreary. The audience can imagine living in house where there is nothing but solitude and misery. The solemn atmosphere makes the readers start to understand how lonely and depressing living in the house actually was.
Simile is often used by poets and is used mainly for description in Dulce Et Decorum Est. The poet provides us with these similes as he has simplified them to a state in which we would understand them. An example of this would be: “flound’ring like a man in fire or lime…” this example makes us aware of the movement which this soldier would use during the gas attack “flound’ring”. Another implication this simile has is that the soldier would not be in control of the situation as if a man was on fire he would not be able to put it out simply and this would be similar with the soldier used in the example as this would be an unusually helpless situation for him to be in. Owen does not use simile as much as the previous kinds of imagery.
The tranquil sensory imagery of “sweet scented stuff when the breeze drew across it” allows the reader to feel relaxed but then it’s immediately changed with the shocking encounter between the child and the saw when “neither refused the meeting.” Moreover, the way the boy reacted to the injury was quite unimaginable considering he’s only a “boy” but he gave a “rueful laugh”. These are all examples of contrast between the passive setting and the sudden change of horrific events, bring out
wind. It was as if it was crying, almost howling for its voice to be