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CM107 Unit 7 Discussion Body Paragraph Revision Chart Good evening class, Below I have included my revision chart. How does it look so far? Did I do okay with paraphrasing? I struggled some on getting it paraphrased correctly. Thank you in advanced. Topic sentence for body paragraph 1 of Unit 6 Assignment To start, teachers are trying to pay back student loan dept and they have out of pocket classroom expenses, which is causing financial strain. A peer reviewed, secondary source that helps support the topic sentence  https://www.nea.org/advocating-for-change/new-from-nea/depth-educators-college- debt Short original passage from the source “Nearly half of all educators took out student loans to pay for college, and they still owe $58,700, on average. Among them, one in seven still owes more than $105,000, according to new NEA research.” ( NEA, 2021) Your summary of the source information in your own words There is a large number of teachers that struggle with student loan dept, most owing about $59,000 and some others owing about $100,000. They were promised relief from the federal public service loan forgiveness program. Teachers have been denied this relief for reasons unknown to them. Revised Paragraph that includes topic sentence original ideas summarized source information supporting topic sentence a signal phrase like According to Smith… when you use the source analysis of the source information    To start, teachers are trying to pay back student loan debt and they have out of pocket classroom expenses, which is causing financial strain. Depending on the amount of time they spent in college they have an immense amount of debt. According to the NEA, there is a large number of teachers that struggle with student loan dept, most owing about $59,000 and some others owing about $100,000 (2021, para. 1). They are being denied relief from the federal public service loan forgiveness program that is supposed to be there to help them. The denial reasons are unknown, and it is causing frustration and financial stress. On top of the student loan debt, teachers have out of pocket expenses for classroom supplies. They are purchasing any supplies like crayons and pencils when their classroom becomes low out of their own pockets. Teachers are also purchasing any holiday party supplies for their students to have fun and relax some. References Flannery, M. E. (2021, July 27). The Depth of Educators’ College Debt . National Education Association. Retrieved November 6, 2022, from https://www.nea.org/advocating-for-change/new-from-nea/depth- educators-college-debt
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