critique about this text( getting to kmow Marcus) Hello classmates as well as fellow brothers and sisters in Christ. My name is Marcus Young, born in Detroit, MI but currently reside in St. Louis's historic district of Central west end. I'm a proud Father of a four year old amazing young boy name Kairo. My life has definitely been a journey full of many testimonials experiences displaying the goodness of God's grace and mercy. I truly love Jesus Christ and believe in him with every being of my body. My Faith along with my walk along side the Lord is by far the greatest part of my life. I have an associate's degree in applied science which certifies me as a medical assistant. I have skills in electrical, carpentry, machine operating, certified in all models of Fork lift operating and culinary arts. I'm currently employed at RBO print logistics approaching a year with the company. My true calling is serving others doing the Lord's will and purpose that he has set out for my life. I am a spiritual influence to many different people in my life, I pray and hold a small but yet powerful fellowship service everyday. Being anointed and discipled through the baptism of the holy spirit of Jesus Christ he has given me a vision as well as provision to start a congregation. The primary focus of my ministry is to help save and deliver troubled youth, homeless, sick, and prison inmates. I'm very passionate, enthusiastic, and motivated to become a vessel for Jesus. I want to be a beacon of hope for all walks of life may the glory of god reign through me. The four main principles I live by is Glorifying god in all my doings, Obedience, Repentance, and the love of God as well as his people. May the peace of the lord be with you all and I'm praying for everyone's strength, health, well being, and may the blessings of the almighty creator fall upon you all.

critique about this text( getting to kmow Marcus)

Hello classmates as well as fellow brothers and sisters in Christ. My name is Marcus Young, born in Detroit, MI but currently reside in St. Louis's historic district of Central west end. I'm a proud Father of a four year old amazing young boy name Kairo. My life has definitely been a journey full of many testimonials experiences displaying the goodness of God's grace and mercy. I truly love Jesus Christ and believe in him with every being of my body. My Faith along with my walk along side the Lord is by far the greatest part of my life. I have an associate's degree in applied science which certifies me as a medical assistant. I have skills in electrical, carpentry, machine operating, certified in all models of Fork lift operating and culinary arts. I'm currently employed at RBO print logistics approaching a year with the company. My true calling is serving others doing the Lord's will and purpose that he has set out for my life. I am a spiritual influence to many different people in my life, I pray and hold a small but yet powerful fellowship service everyday. Being anointed and discipled through the baptism of the holy spirit of Jesus Christ he has given me a vision as well as provision to start a congregation. The primary focus of my ministry is to help save and deliver troubled youth, homeless, sick, and prison inmates. I'm very passionate, enthusiastic, and motivated to become a vessel for Jesus. I want to be a beacon of hope for all walks of life may the glory of god reign through me. The four main principles I live by is Glorifying god in all my doings, Obedience, Repentance, and the love of God as well as his people. May the peace of the lord be with you all and I'm praying for everyone's strength, health, well being, and may the blessings of the almighty creator fall upon you all.