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Why Zinczenko's Essay 'What You Eat Is Your Business'

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Zinczenko doesn’t include naysayers that oppose him. Since obesity has grown at an alarming rate in the last decade in the United States, people have noticed this issue and tried to look for ways to fix it. A lot of opinions have been discussed; however, even with the existence of such radical thoughts, Zinczenko doesn’t mention any of them. A counter argument that he can include is Radley Balko’s work in his article “What You Eat is Your Business”. He argues that people are responsible for their own diet because they choose what to eat. Throughout his essay, he makes many accusations with not much elaborations and he also keeps pointing an angry finger at the government. According to him, “Instead of manipulating or intervening in the array …show more content…

He believes that the government should make consumers responsible for their choices instead of trying to change what foods are accessible to consumers. In addition, he suggests that “The best way to alleviate the obesity ‘public health’ crisis is to remove obesity from the realm of public health” (468). In other words, Balko thinks that obesity wouldn’t be such a great public issue if we made it the personal issue that it is. Throughout his article, he relies on his opinion without providing any numbers for the readers. On the contrary, Zinczenko uses a lot of statistics and data to support his argument. I find the technique that he uses to support his argument very weak and unprofessional. I also think that some of the ideas he is discussing are invalid. For instance, I disagree with him that obesity should be considered a personal health issue instead of a public issue because I believe that many people in our country are struggling with obesity and, although it does not directly affect me, it is a very serious issue that need to be taken into consideration because it affects other people’s health and lives. Zinczenko not including any counter arguments in his essay makes it seems as if he is afraid of criticism and opposition which weakens his

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