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The Determination: A Fictional Narrative

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The Determination
The land that is divided into two parts where there are enormous mountains and long rivers separating the two lands. One side of the land is full of people who are wealthy that also rule the whole entire land. It has gorgeous buildings and gadgets that are valuable. Only the elderly people rule the whole land inside a huge building, keeping track of every single person. The other side is full of people that are the opposite of wealth and that is where Annabelle, her family, and her best friend Ellen lives. Annabelle is a 12 year old girl who looks tough on the outside, but is sensitive and weak on the inside. She has dark brown hair. Her best friend Ellen is also 12 years old girl and has brown hair with brown eyes. One …show more content…

They have been climbing for almost 3 days.

Annabelle, almost out of breath, said, “I think it’s going to take a pretty long time to get to the other side. I barely have any strength to swim all the way over there.”

In response, Ellen replied, “Yeah, me too. I think we need some rest.”

They sat near by a tree in the shades. It was almost 9:00am when they decided to take a nap. They both gulped down their water and took a short nap. Annabelle couldn’t sleep. She was too worried that she might not get to the building. That she might fail, but she had determination and slowly closed her eyes. When they woke up, it was already 12:00pm in the afternoon. Annabelle and Ellen decided that it was time to swim across the river. They held onto their backpacks and jumped into the cold water. They swam and swam. Annabelle and Ellen swam halfway, but their legs and arms were getting tired. Annabelle almost drowned because of her lack of strength, but she tried her best and made it to the other side. Right when they got to the other side, they were exhausted and all they could hear were the sound of their …show more content…

The man came up to them and asked, “What are you girls here for?”

Annabelle responded, politely, “We’re here to talk to Michelle Luberto, the ruler of this community.”

The man, with a little smile, said, “Sure, she’s right in that room. The door is right in front. Over there.” He pointed to the door.

Annabelle and Ellen quietly walked to the door that was in front of them and opened it. They saw the women sitting on her chair and grinned at them, like she expected us that we were going to be here. The lady said, “Come on in Annabelle, Ellen. What are you guys here for?”

Determined, Annabelle slowly opened her mouth and said, “I want to talk to you about my people. The non wealthy.”

Michelle said, “What about it?”

Annabelle responded, “I think that it is not fair to have the wealthiest people ruin our land and family whenever they want, but we can’t go over to the other side. I think that we should have all equal rights and that it shouldn’t be divided into the wealthy and the non

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