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Positive Impact On Our Culture By Josh Rose And Is Facebook Making Us Lonely

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Is society being dehumanized by technology? Or are technological advancements bringing people closer together? In recent years, the growing use of technology has been impacting the way humans function and communicate in everyday life. Accelerating rates of social media usage questions the vast impact on society. Thus, emerging the argument of whether or not social media is playing the role of connecting the world together or tearing it apart and leaving individuals to feel a sense of loneliness. In the articles “How Social Media Is Having a Positive Impact on Our Culture” by Josh Rose and “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely” by Stephen Marche, the authors discuss opposing views on the topic of social media. Rose argues that social media has had a …show more content…

Only using pathos and his infirm credibility as a father provides for a feeble argument. The use of pathos is somewhat effective and understandable, yet nowhere near as effective as it could have been if all rhetorical appeals would have been employed. Rose starts the article off with a story about his communication over a text messaging app with his son and conveys the way it comforts him to be able to interact and know what is going on in his son's life (Rose 554). This example pulls at the readers heart strings where they can see the impact this level of connection has for this father. The use of emotional appeal is effective in getting the reader to feel for the author and works to prove his point. However, since this is the only appeal decently used Rose’s argument is not fully developed and has not built trust and credibility to the reader. Trying to add to his case, Rose takes opinions from his facebook page in which people respond that they are confused by the way social media effects society (Rose 555). These opinions are not facts and do not strongly aid him in growing an argument. In addition, he only uses one outside source to paraphrase the argument that “those who see the current movement as good, bad, or normal. I think we all know people from each camp. But ultimately, the last group is the one best equipped to handle it …show more content…

Throughout the article Rose discusses many assumptions without any quality support. He bases observation from a coffee shop and states “four people are looking at screens and four people are reading something on paper. And I'm doing both. I see Facebook open on two screens, but I'm sure at some point, it's been open on all of them” ( Rose 555). Rose one, is assuming that everyone uses facebook and two, is assuming that the people in this coffee shop represent the world and that everyone is similar to this one room. He then states that “people aren’t giving up long form reading, considered thinking, or social interactions. They are just filling all the space in between” (Rose 555). Again, making assumptions that if people are using social media they must be doing it just to fill time. That however, is a hasty generalization made from flawed inductive reasoning and is therefore invalid and causes readers to lose both trust and interest in what Rose has to say. Throughout the article Rose uses his opinion and starts sentences off with “I think” in hopes to persuade the reader, however this opinion based argumentation is not helpful in gaining reliance. For example rose states, “I think we can all agree which one feels better”(555). While he may be right that most people will agree with him, leaving his argument up to assumptions is a poor decision rather than backing it up with facts and

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