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I inhaled the cool, fresh air, and I started running towards the edge of the pool. I took the leap. My feet left the ground, and I plunged into the deep, blue, water of the pool. I sunk down, little by little, unable to get to the surface. I started to panic. I was sinking down, I couldn’t get back to the surface, and fatally running out of air. My brain was frenzied, I was drowning! I couldn’t get to the surface, I didn’t know how! The water’s greedy, wet hands consuming me, dragging me farther down. Dread was in my veins, because I was running out of air. I needed to get back to the surface. But the water just wraps itself around my my toes, up to my ankles, knees, thighs, neck! I have no air. I don't know what to do! The water creeps up my face, forcing itself into my lungs. Why… Why didn’t I listen to them... I think as I sink farther down into the bottomless depths of the pool. My air was gone, and I was sure my life had gone with it.

Pool pool pool POOL!!! I chant in my head. I was four years old, and driving to my parent’s friend’s house, which has a pool! I have always loved swimming, even if I didn't technically know how yet. “Mom!” I complain, rearranging myself in the car-seat of the Honda mini-van. “When are we gonna GET there?”

“We’re almost there.” my mother replies with an even tone, but I can tell that she’s annoyed by the way she’s wrinkling her brows. Hmmm…. What can I do for entertainment… Then I look over at my sister Emma, who is playing a game on

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