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Poem Analysis Of Race Politics By Luis J. Rodriguez

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“‘Race’ Politics” In the poem, “‘ Race’ Politics” by Luis J. Rodriguez, I have annotated several pieces of syntax, imagery, and connotation. This poem is about how two brothers, of the age six and nine, have a bad experience going over to a place called South Gate to buy groceries. I believe that the author uses these forms of elements to create emphasis and emotion on the story. These elements, I believe, helped the story have more of a connection with the reader and a first person view of what the characters in the poem had to go through. In this poem, Rodriguez utilizes many examples of connotation to give the story more emphasis and meaning. Connotation is an emotional word that is connected to an emotion. One example I annotated …show more content…

Imagery means to use figurative language to compare one object to another object. An example that stood out to me was on lines 60-61,” He slid from their grasp like a rotten banana peel” (Rodriguez). I believe that this is an example of imagery because it is making an image in the reader’s mind comparing how his brother fell to a rotten banana peel. Another example that I would like to point out is on line 35, “ this abdomen of land” (Rodriguez). This line contains imagery because the use of the word abdomen is a metaphor and is comparing the middle of the land to the abdomen of a body. These examples helped clarify the statement and convinced me that this poem has …show more content…

In lines 18-25, “So there we go, climbing over the iron wood ties, over discarded sofas and bent up market carts, over a weed-and-dirt road, into a place called South Gate-all white. All American” (Rodriguez). I noticed that these lines contain many commas making us know that they had to go through all these obstacles finally to get to South Gate. Also, the “all white. All American” makes the audience feel like what these two brothers are doing is a very bold statement and that it’s dangerous to be here. Another example that stood out to me was in lines 26-34. These lines state, “ We entered the forbidden narrow line of hate, imposed, transposed, supposed, a line of power/ powerlessness full of meaning, meaning nothing- those lines that crisscross” ( Rodriguez). The syntax in this poem made me feel the commas meant that all this was running through his head like crazy and they over thought their decision and they were anticipating the moment their feet hit South Gate land. I feel that the syntax gives the poem more character and

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