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Picking Fence Short Story

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Picked Fence
The pain was greater than any other I had experience thus far, and I was afraid of what would have happened next.
It was spring break a week where the weather is delightful therefore we were heading out to Mexico. I think I was about 6 years old, and I knew I was very excited to see my only grandma and others in my mother’s side of the family. The week went by fast as if by a blink of an eye it would have turn from Monday to Saturday and yet we still had so many places to visit. It was a nice windy and sunny day, and we were planning to go to the ranch-to relax and have family time, perhaps even go horseback ridding. We had just arrived to the ranch. When I got off, I turned my head and noticed lots of pine and oak trees, houses, …show more content…

We were all bored, so we had began playing games. We got pine cones and started throwing them at one another like dodge ball. All fun and games until we began playing follow the leader; I was walking behind my cousin, Stephany, and my sister, Berenice, was walking behind me. I was just tired and wanted to eat; my cousin walked through a picked fence, I followed when suddenly my pants got caught on the wire. The only thing going through my head was, “No, these are my favorite pants!” All I wanted to do was to get untangled form the wire, so I was pulling and I was feeling a burrowing in my skin. The wire had ripped right into me and the pain was so tremendous that all I could do was to yell for help and cry for my mommy. My cousin and sister panicked while my aunt ran to me and carried me to the table and sat me down. As I turn, my parents were returning from picking out food and when they saw me they ran. They ask questions of how things happened. They ripped my pants open, placed a bandana into my mouth and said, “Bite down”; I did once the alcohol slide through my leg I cried as it burned. It was an exhausting pain and they carried me to the truck and told me we were going home soon. Those soothing words to my ears were like a kiss

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