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Personal Narrative: My Life In Hawaii

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Have you ever experienced something so amazing that it did not even feel real? I was engulfed in this feeling for the entire 10 days that I was in Hawaii. Now, everything about Hawaii was so magical but there is one memory in particular that sticks out in my mind. We had just landed in Kona, Hawaii. We made it to the house we were staying at and everyone began to unpack. Of course, I could not wait any longer to go explore some of the amazing features that Hawaii has to offer. I finally convinced my family to take the 3-minute drive down to the beach from our rental house. Once we stepped foot on that beach my jaw hit the warm, silky sand. I had never seen anything so beautifully breath-taking. The palm trees danced in the wind, the waves crashed with a mighty force and my …show more content…

I think my brother had the same thought because next thing I knew; I was racing him into the water not even thinking about what I was doing. Let me first just say that this was my first time swimming in the ocean, let alone in the forceful, salty Hawaiian waves. As my brother and I began to get more and more comfortable, we moved out further and further until my mom yelled “okay kids! That’s far enough.” So, either no one told me how to swim in the ocean, or I was too excited to listen, but the message never got across to me on how to swim in the ocean. There is a difference between waves you need to swim under and waves that would do no harm swimming over. I thought I had gotten the hang of it … but then this happened; I heard the sound of an enormous wave approaching and no time to react. I turned around right as the wave was crashing over me. I have never felt a force that strong to have one second been almost up to my shoulders in water to the next, completely submerged underwater being carried by the waves. I heard nothing but water rushing all around

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