Personal Narrative Fiction

I had been cringing about day for so long. I was completely terrified to go into that room. As the door opened I was exposed to a cold draft and I could feel the dense air. The day I was told this needed to be done was horrifying, and now it’s actually happening. They rolled me over to a new bed and I looked around seeing doctors everywhere. There was a table that they rolled next to me and on it was things that I can’t even explain. They put a green mask on me with tubes going through both sides of it. They told me I’d get drowsy and all of the sudden I closed my eyes and it was happening. I was getting knee surgery.

Now we couldn't see anything. It was hard to breathe. Me and my friends were all next to each other trying to find our way back. It was impossible because we couldn't see which way we were going. One of my friends said ¨I can't breathe!¨ all of us said it's ok we're gonna make it. Then my friend died in front of all of us. My friends started to die one by one, I saw them all die right in front of me. Then I realised that I wasn't gonna make it, so I started to cry because all my friends were dead, and I was about to die. Then someone came to me and said ¨Can you breathe.¨ But it was too late. As the guy came I suffocated to death. Well, I thought I was, but then I woke up in my house. I thought I was dead. It turned out that the guy saved me somehow. I don't know how he did, but he did. Everything was back to normal except for the fact that my friends

As we arrived at the hospital, they said we are going to move you to a wheelchair to get inside and to our room. We had room number two-hundred- in one. We waited for the nurse to come with my file and to take a look. (knock, knock) Finally, I say to

I awoke with the sound of beeps in the distance. My eyes fluttered, eyelashes blocking my small spot of a view. In the corner, I could see my mom, her head in her hands, shaking slowly from tears. I gradually moved my head to the left. The room was bright, with white floors and bleached walls. There were multiple carts full of medical supplies right next to me. While scanning the room, I could hear my mother gasp and run out of the door. Moments later, a tall lanky guy walked into in the room. He was wearing scrubs with little stars and a light blue stethoscope was dangling from

He woke up in a dark room. He was numb and dizzy. The figure of a man kept on flickering through his head. He couldn’t move. He had no memory. His whole body was full of pain and agony.

His skin was turning gray. The hair on his head had started to die, leaving only strands of dull white hair that speckled the top of his head. The rest of his figure seemed small. He was sinking inside of the bed, the ability of movement having left him long ago. His eyes were closed tightly, pain spreading along his face every so often. I remember him scrunching up his face and his mouth opening and closing like he was calling for help. Like he wanted someone to save him from the pain he was

He falls in to the ocean waters. He let out a blaring shriek for help, and no one came. Next, when he got cold headed he started swimming to the nearest island he could see. He finally gets to the island and he starts to rest. Then, when he wakes up he looks around and sees a pool of blood around him.

I jolt awake. “Must have been a bad dream” I thought to myself. I looked around and was shocked at my surroundings. A destroyed hospital room. The paint on the walls is peeling and it smells like old sheets and medicine. The beds are covered in rust and pieces of the ceiling have fallen on the floor. The room is dark, but the sun is shining through the barricaded windows. I rip the needles out of my arms and struggle to stand up. I put on my clothes that were still neatly folded under the bed. I walk out of the room. There were blood stains on the wall and random hospital supplies thrown on the floor. My heart starts to race. I try to think of what could have happened. While I was thinking I was snapped out of my thoughts by a banging behind me. I turn around to see a door, bolted shut. I decide not to open it. I begin to walk

On his way home from Baseball, Julian was thinking to himself about what he could do outdoors. Then he gets a perfect idea, "Lets go on a hiking trip and I'll invite some guys too!" Julian then calls some guys from his baseball team, Justin who is very layback and funny. He calls Ricky who is the captain of the baseball team and Jesus (who is called chuy)and he is more of the gentlemen type but if you get him mad, he could probably take out a trailer full of bad guys. Julian decides he'll call them tomorrow, the next day Julian calls Ricky first.

The hospital room he now stood in was bare and untouched, but the hallways beyond it looked just as they did when he walked them himself. He examined his body, noticing that his arms weren’t skinny anymore, but built like they used to be. He noticed that he was back in his favorite outfit- a dark pair of blue jeans, a plaid shirt, and sperrys. He walked into the small bathroom and looked into the mirror, seeing his former dark, tall hair and finally recognizing who he was. He stared into the mirror, extremely confused as to what was happening. His thoughts were interrupted, however, by the feeling of a strong force pulling him away and towards something much more important. He followed it out into the hallway and down to the end of it, into a room filled with doctors, surrounding a small child in a bed identical to his own. The girl was unmoving, laid back in the bed with tons of wires threading into her body. The room was filled with the sound of loud voices and beeps, signaling her body was in complete distress. He felt himself, without even thinking about it, walk over to the edge of the bed, reach out, grab her hand, and squeeze it. As if he had flipped a switch, the beeping stopped. The nurses and doctors stood dumbfounded, their eyebrows twisting in confusion. He realized then that he had just stopped a little girl’s body from shutting down, without knowing what he was doing. It was as if he was a

When he got there he wasn't able to understand what when on . Then he spotted a bracelet stained with blood. His fears were then confirmed, his best friend had been injured, he called out her name, but there was no response, he then spotted a gun on the ground . Greif took him over he put the gun to his chest and pulled the trigger (bang) he immediately fell to the ground and in his last moments felt

He has no mother? I couldn't believe it. I was in a state of shock. Why would Jerry lie to me? I began to cry and immediately left the orphanage. Took my keys and drove. Just drove. I didn't know where I was going, I just needed to get out of here, this town, this state, this country. I felt betrayed. Tears rushing down my cheeks, my eye makeup all over my face. I was a mess. After about an hour, the sky was pitch black and I decided to go back. There was no point in running away. That little boy shouldn't affect my life whatsoever.

When I woke up I had no idea where I was. I was dazed and really confused. The nurse came in and said, “Jaclyn you're in the Toledo Flower Hospital and you passed out.” My parents were sitting there with worried faces. I just wanted to know what was going on. She was giving me a medicine through my IV, looking as if she was frantic and dripping with sweat. As soon as I got my medicine a stretcher burst through the door. There was a bloody unconscious man lying on it. My nurse immediately ran to them and she was rushing around and looked like she was on an adrenaline rush. She was yelling for a Doctor, but there wasn't one around. She had to make the decision to intubate the patient without the doctor and that was a risky decision.

“You need to calm down Mr. Sharp, I will explain everything after I know that you yourself are okay.” The doctor told him in a soothing voice.

“ I heard Tahoe just got four inches of fresh snow!” my friend David said excitedly as we passed Donner lake on the freeway. David and I were on our way to visit an abandoned ski resort that we only heard people talk about. The dark clouds outside were looming over our heads as the sun began to set. Icy snow began to flutter down, covering the narrow trail we have been following for last couple of hours. Suddenly our jeep halts at a stand still and I see the distress on David’s face. The warmth of the car is quickly escaping as we open to the door and jump into the dark forest outside.