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It’s too early to do anything to your full capacity, I think as I board my morning train for my commute to the city. As I sit down on one of the dingy, dark blue, mildly nauseating seats, I glance around at my companions for the hour. One middle-aged businessman who is entirely too full of himself, one tired mother with a sleeping baby, and her. When I first see her, my eyes skip over her entirely, not noticing her hunched over figure, but my eyes quickly fly back to her. Her broad shoulders are equal, if not wider, than the span of the seat. These shoulders travel down into long arms that end in delicate, spindly fingers with glossy blue nails that eagerly turn the pages of her thick, heavy looking book. One hand reaches up to tuck a thick lock of dark brown hair behind her ear, and then returns to hold her book. The rest of her short hair floats on her head, like waves in a stormy sea. One lock dangles down in between her strong eyebrows, down her soft nose, and points to her full wine-colored lips. Her skin is a dark, warm olive color that contrasts with the light blue dress shirt she’s wearing. One of the long legs of the tight blue …show more content…

I soften my glare a bit, and turn off the music that is coming through my earphones. She whispers a word of thanks to me, and I nod my head as I watch the businessman angrily return to his seat. The mother glares at the man as he walks past her, and she carefully stands in the rocking train, and, burdened with her child and several bags, hobbles towards the girl and I. I nod a greeting as she sits down, and begins stroking the girl’s shoulders. Over the rumbling of the train, I can hear the girl’s hushed sobs. The mother passes me her child, and I fearfully handle the baby, who has returned to his slumber, while the mother hugs the girl, and whispers words of assurance into her

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