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Overachievers Analysis

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Overachievers, by Alexandra Robbins, is an exposé about the lives of driven high school students at Walt Whitman High School in Maryland. Throughout the book Robbins central argument is that college admission expectations have made high school a very cut-throat environment, leading students who try to meet these expectations to have deteriorating mental and physical health. Robbins defends the idea that over achieving students’ heath worsens because of the stress of high school. An example of this is Julie, who is perceived as the school superstar. Throughout the course of the novel Julie’s hair is thinning and falling out into clumps. She visits an array of doctors who all assure her that this is very normal in high school girls, and that …show more content…

AP Frank has a breakdown in his guidance counselor’s office because of the standards his mom has set for him. He feels there is no hope for life to improve and is trapped by the immense pressure his mom puts on him to succeed. “AP Frank slumped into his chair, took a breath, broke into sobs, and poured out his feelings.” The reader sees AP Frank reach his limit and crack; he is suffocating from the pressure to get into a top-tier college. The imagery Robbins uses to describe the breakdown AP Frank has makes the reader feel like they are experiencing it for themselves. One feels as if they are in the room with AP Frank, because of how vividly his movements are described. Robbins crafts her argument by following students, because the reader is able to see how stress molds a student, and can even lead them to their emotional breaking point, like AP Frank’s. Robbins is able to show the reader that high school stress, because of the pressure to get into a good college, can ruin a person’s mental health, and drive them to the point of insanity. This applies to the emotional appeal of the reader by showing them how bad AP Frank thinks his life is and how he thinks it will not improve. It is evident that Robbins wants the reader to feel as if changes must be made soon, so no other student will feel this

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