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My Second Shot Narrative

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I look at the clock 15 sec the score is 95 tartan 96 north polars.Coach told me that the ball coming to me. The ref whistle blown it is game time.jared throw in the ball into me. I put ball on the ground cross over 10 sec i drive the lane 5 sec i do a eurostep i put up a layup. It goes in.i look at the clock 0 sec. WE WON. the team piled on top of me. I was so happy. I was not just a win it was pride because we were there rivals. We were 1-0 in the season. After the game my mom said ‘congratulation’
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They were high fiving me and patting my back. Now i was really happy. Coach Joe came over patted my back and said ‘good job’ then i hop in an ice bath. Later that night me and my mom and dad had dinner we were having chicken and mash potatoes. My dad said ‘i heard you had a good game and hit the game winning shot’ ‘yea it was good’’ i said. After dinner i went outside and played basketball i practiced my three pointer because coach told me to practice it. So i put up my first shot off Second shot off third off. i keep missing i was getting very frustrated i put up another shot and missed ‘oh my gosh’ i said angrily. My neighbor Jimmy came outside and said ’ you suck’ ‘i would like to see you try’ i said back ‘ ‘let's have a three point contest to see who better’ he said while i was waiting i took out my pack of cigarettes and took puff and then i saw Jimmy come outside and i quickly …show more content…

‘Ready for this beatdown’ i said ‘The real question you should be asking is are you ready for this beatdown’ Jimmy said ‘well lets see’ i said confidently ‘you can go first’ Jimmy ‘well that's a mistake’ i said while i took a shoot swish the noise of the net as the basketball went in. ‘Boom’ i said as it went in. ‘Lucky shot’ Jimmy said. ‘Yea whatever’ i said Jimmy took his first shoot he missed i did not say anything i took my shoot swish he took his shot missed. After the game was over i won 10-0. ‘Maybe walk the walk before

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