Martin's Changing Experiences: A Narrative Fiction

He looked up at me as I tried to reassure him that he was going to be okay. “Help is on the way.” I could feel the fear in his eyes.

Just as I began asking if they were in any pain, a man yelled, “Hey! Are you guys okay? Do I need to call an ambulance?”

I know the woman was stalking Martin because the story says, “She stood with her back to the door, wheezing, staring directly at Martin.” “She had to be crazy. Why else would she stare at him like that?” This proves that the woman was stalking Martin because the story ended as the woman spoke and said, “Hello Martin, she said, and laughed and pushed the stop button on the elevator. Martin got onto the elevator because he didn't believe in himself, and believed his father and got stuck in the elevator with the woman.

The infected in the area of the thrown explosive instinctively reached for the bomb as if it were edible. It went off sending a shock wave through the bus and rattled its grill with screws and nuts which Albert had used for shrapnel. The kids screamed, frightened by the blast. Flesh and bodily fluids cover the bus’s front windows in gore. After turning on the wipers, Albert noticed a crack in one of the front windows. “Not so close!” he shouted at Ryan. “You’re going to shut the engine down if you blow the radiator!”

Martin quivered, and with a shaky voice, asked “Who are you?” The lady looked confused as to if Martin should have known her name. Martin now somehow recognized her a little bit more when that expression hit her face, but he was still clueless. Martin yelled a bit louder “Who are you, tell me now!”

He figured that he would go to jail either way so he was just going to kill him now in front of everybody. Joe looked for a weapon a knife or even someone with a gun that he could take to shoot him. There wasn’t a thing in sight to kill him with but Joe was determined and would stop until his father was dead. He sat down to think and decided that he was going to wait until after he leaves and look for a opportunity then. As the day went on he became anxious and jumpy when the slightest things would happen. He waited and waited and now it was time to strike, the work day was over and his father was closing down shop. So Joe waited and watched he decided he was going to hit him with a car from the parking lot. When he saw his dad come out of the store he was filled with rage and wanted to kill him. Then just as he thought he had him his father turned down an alleyway Joe realized that he caught on to him and his father was now running, Joe cut him off because of the speed of the car. Joe got out and his father thought he was a mugger at first, but then it hit him it was his son and he was back for revenge. Matt was scared to death and wanted to run but he was to old now and would never outrun him. So he stood his ground against his son. While Joe was in the car he had found a knife and was going use that just like he used on him. Joe started after him and but his father still stood still.

The old lady scares Martin, the elevator, and Martin’s dad also scare him. In the end of The Elevator the old lady

1. Throughout the story suspense is aroused and maintained excellently. This is achieved by the character the author creates. Mr. Martin is characterized as a neat and cautious man, who never took a smoke or a drink in his life. Our suspense is aroused when the author states that it has been “a week to the day since Mr. Martin had decided to rub out Mrs. Ulgine Barrows”. This arouses our suspense because we are told Mr. Martin is planning to murder this woman. The suspense is maintained with Mr. Martin’s thoughts. We as an audience are given his thoughts through the use of the 3rd person omniscient point of view. His thoughts are mostly on the issue on his dislike of Mrs. Barrows. Because of this, he

The ambulance then hurried to get Nick out of the car, but when they pulled him out there was blood all over him and it was too late to save him, Nick had already lost too much blood. The ambulance dropped them off at the hospital to look and see if Matt was seriously injured. Luckily he only sprained his pointer finger, so it was not that bad. After a day Matt was able to leave the hospital. Since they did not have a carr they had called a taxi to pick them up to go to the airport. They had booked a flight for 2 o’clock. They waited the 30 minutes they had sitting down thinking about what happened. They got on the plane, but they did not have seats next to each other. The both of them have not slept in a while so they both slept the whole flight

He goes to the elevator and tries to find the women, so he can live with her but she is not to be found. Martin gives up and goes back to his apartment to live with his dad. He goes back to the elevator after packing his bags, and sees the women there. Martin talks to the women for the first time, Martin says “ why weren't you at the elevator when I was with my bags” women replies “ I don't want you to live with me were just friends and all I want to do is feed you” Martins says back “ but why…” Woman replies fast “ it's to hard to explain..” After talking to the women, Martin decides to tell his dad and his dad doesn’t believe him, and Martin doesn’t know what to do now. That same day Martin and his dad go to the elevator because, Martin’s dad is curious of what Martin is seeing, but he sees nothing , but Martin does… “The woman is standing there looking mad” Martin said. The next day Martin goes back to the elevator and the woman is not there. Later that day he goes and she is still not there. Next day he goes back and he goes to the lobby, but as he goes there something grabs him and he is blinded, then he hears his name and

“To keep Martin from looking towards the fat lady, He stared at the numbers by the door”.(27) He was also tense that the fat lady was just watching him. After getting off the elevator Martin went to school, “during school he thought about her all day did she live in the building he kept asking himself “.(73) Martin was not sure if she lived there, so he was thinking what to do if he saw her again. He was also thinking if she did not live there he can not be scared of her.

“Let’s get him to the ambulance.” I heard the doctor say. With help from he and my dad, I walked over to the ambulance, parked just around the

'At this point, he was losing consciousness, ' recalls father Roberto Llanas Sr. 'At that point I got scared and called an ambulance. '

our journey came upon us. The sun had just climbed over the first huge hill and its brilliant

One of Martin’s fears would be the fat lady, which he sees every time he rides the elevator alone. “He stood there, unable to move, and then backed away. And as he did so, her expression