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Making Water Annotation

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I have selected the plot with the thought of talking about pollution affecting water quality, with a sub plot of deforestation. Making water a “spirit” gives it a human form and characteristic so audience can all relate and understand it better. The main character is drawn in the form of a young girl no older than 12, so little kids feel more related to it. Also since her hair is made out of water, it perfectly described the water quality at the time without actually mentioning it. Also young audience will find it more interesting and more “water” like. The setting is in the forest because that's where nature is stereotypically presented in, and it’s also effective in showing the damage humans have done to it. The message of reducing water …show more content…

I drew her earlier this year and partly this is what inspired me to do as the plot of my story. When I was drawing her hair I was thinking, what if the water is not clear but polluted water like a lot of the waters now. How would she be feeling? Would she be sad? Will she be able to do anything about it? and the list goes on.

I felt like the questions really struck me and got me thinking, the idea was too deep in my head.
Until I was trying to think of a plot for sustainability that I realised she’d be the perfect character for my book, and it will talk about water pollutions like how I questioned it. Because I already gave it heaps of thoughts beforehand it didn’t take me long to figure out my actual theme or plot, and the draft picture book was fun and easy to do.

Also another book/movie that have influenced me is the “Lorex”. It talked about deforestation and in the end how the animals all had to leave in the same way my story did. The message in that story somewhat involves money and greed, where my story doesn’t. My story focus more on the environmental effect of humans being greedy and ignorant but in my story it is not mentioned, but more of a hidden

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