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John Frederick Nims Love Poem Analysis

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“Love Poem” by John Frederick Nims is an excellent of example of an author using many types of literary terms to emphasize his theme of a love that is imperfect yet filled with acceptance. In, this poem Nims uses assonance, metaphor, and imagery to support his theme of “Imperfect, yet realistic love”. In “Love Poem”, Nims writes a letter to the woman that he loves. Unlike most love poems, Nims does not describe his lover as a perfect woman. Instead, he describes her faults, along with her attributes, creating a more realistic view about relationships. In stanza 1, he states “ My clumsiest dear, whose hands have shipwrecked vases, at whose quick touch all glasses chip and ring”. Nims is explaining that she is very clumsy and rough to the point that she has broken vases and and chipped glasses. He also refers to her as impulsive, always late and standing out in a crowd in stanza 3 where he states “ Unpredicatble dear, the taxi drivers’ terror...Misfit in any space. And never on time”. Nims then contrasts the flaws of his lover with the attributes that she displays. In stanza 2, he states “Except all ill-at-ease fidgeting people: The refugee uncertain at the door. You make at home; deftly you steady the drunk clambering on his undulant floor”. In this stanza, Nims is praising his love for being a welcoming, compassionate person who can put any uncomfortable, nervous person at ease and make an outcast feel welcome. He also explains that she is the type of person that would help a drunk person steady themselves to safety when others would watch him stumble and fall. In the last stanza, Nims writes, “ Be with me darling, early and late. Smash glasses-, I will study wry music for your sake. For should your hands drop white and empty, all the toys of the world would break”. Here Nims ends the poem by saying that he wants to always be with her and that he will study her ways and learn to embrace them because without her, his world would be meaningless. Nims’ use of certain literary terms support the theme of love and acceptance in the poem. He uses assonance in stanza 4 where he states “ With words and people and love you move at ease; And keep us, all devotion, at your knees.” The use of the words and,

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