The tone, detached, is conveyed through the elements language and syntax. Language is used to express thoughts or feelings to one another. In the short story Harrison Bergeron, the author, Kurt Vonnegut, uses alliteration to thoroughly show the tone of detachment. In the story, Hazel, one of the main characters, states, “It’s all kind of mixed up in my mind” (Vonnegut). Since Vonnegut uses alliteration to closely connect each word, Hazel’s statement shows how Hazel is confused and her mind is divided, another word for detached, into different conclusions of the situation. Vonnegut uses syntax to arrange words and phrases to create well-formed sentences. Syntax is used in the short story through repetition. He uses repetition to show that it
John. C. Maxwell, a writer, and a priest, once said “There are two kinds of pride, ‘good pride’ represents our dignity and self-respect. ‘Bad’ pride is the deadly sin of superiority that reeks of conceit and arrogance” (Quotefancy). Just as there are two sides to pride there are two sides to every human trait, each trait has an advantage and a disadvantage. Being stubborn could mean working towards goals until they have been achieved, or it could mean closing one’s mind so much so they miss out on opportunities they are not looking for. John Maxwell’s paradox of traits is shown through the idea of equality in Kurt Vonnegut Jr’s “Harrison Bergeron”. In this story the society is led to believe everyone is equal because of handicaps, but
Diction is just one of the literary elements used in this short story which convey the narrator's attitude towards Bartleby.
In this sentence, Annie Dillard initially builds up suspense, "[waiting] motionless" for the weasel's return. She further engages her audience through alliteration in three consecutive words, writing "motionless, my mind...", which introduces an unusually calming sensation. I find this alliteration particularly interesting, as Dillard balances the suspense at the beginning of the sentence with a gentle phrase, allowing the reader to pause and reflect upon her current situation. Using juxtaposition, Dillard develops her internal dilemma following the disappearance of the weasel, reintroducing a sense of conflict. While Dillard is at least partially viewing her situation objectively, she is simultaneously pleading that the weasel will return.
Ken Kesey’s figurative language in his novel, One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest, suggests that broken individuals can connect and make each other whole again. The traumatic events that occur when the patients are younger still affect them in their current state. For example, throughout his life, Bromden has always been assumed to be deaf and dumb. When he spoke to people their “machinery dispose[d] of the words like they weren’t even spoken” (181). Kesey’s metaphor represents how Bromden feels that the Combine influences him. When Bromden speaks, the words do not “fit” in the listener’s brain and they ignore him (181). Being a large Native American man, Bromden does not fit into the mold that is set by the Combine (societal expectations), so
The tone of a story, poem or novel is the way the author wants the reader to feel. Most people get the word mood and tone confused with each other, but the mood is the way the reader feels about the story, poem, or novel. In the novel the author’s tone is both suspenseful and sympathetic. For instance, it is suspenseful because Estrella wants to know what the chest filled with steel is for. Also, it is sympathetic because Estrella was being bullied by teachers and she did not realize it was happening until something hurt her feelings.
To begin, the elements of tone and mood work together to reveal and support the message of survival and struggle. In the novel, Chiger uses descriptive details and her thoughts and attitudes toward the situation that she was placed into set the tone. She describes and explains the agony, hatred, and hopelessness she and others felt in the sewers, revealing her bitterness for the sewers and the Nazis. Chiger also uses mood to present her messages by creating different moods around different characters, making some optimistic and hopeful while making others pessimistic and morose. “This was a reflection of their personalities: my father was gregarious and personable; Weiss was gruff and miserable” (Chiger 107). This is relatable because some people may have disparate attitudes toward a negative situation, and each person may have a different demeanor or mood in response to it. Chiger conveys her themes of struggle and survival through tone and mood, and makes it somewhat relatable.
In this excerpt from the Outsiders by S.E Hinton, the Style Elements create an effect. In the excerpt, Ponyboy has just gotten jumped, and attacked, and his brothers, Darry and Sodapop, are cleaning up his cuts. Point of view, and Dialogue in the Outsiders create Sadness. They create sadness because Ponyboy is sad he let himself get hurt. He could also be sad he is injured.
The syntax of the punctuation also creates pauses. Pausing forces reflection: each space of not speaking allows for the processing of the emotions Brooks presents. By pausing and thinking, the emotions can become personal rather than the emotions of the speaker. Silence through repetition thus allows traumatic stories and the related emotions to present themselves in full via reflection.
The use of short sentences in the novel emphasises the power of a word and indicates a thought, the use of short sentences conveys how Colman’s thoughts were not running smoothly and he was struggling to understand himself. Throughout the novel Kay does not indicate which character is talking straight away. Rather Kay keeps the novel flowing with different characters voices and thoughts interrupting another. The idea that the novel is not structured to a specific format showcases the fragmentation of the character of Colman’s identity.
Faulkner uses syntactical strategies throughout his speech to assist him in communicating his message to his audience. In the third paragraph he emphasizes a syntax device known as anaphora, when stating, “He must learn them again… He much teach himself… He writes not of love…He writes not of the heart…”.The anaphora helps Faulkner be effective in his argument by the repetition of words to help him get his view of things across to the audience. To also succor his effectiveness he uses polysyndeton, which is used to draw the audience’s attention therefore adding the effect of persistence and intensity to help keep his audiences attention, making his speech effective. An example of polysyndeton is when he declares “love and honor and pity and pride and compassion and sacrifice” This quote helps signify that authors need to write from their soul and
This bitterness and sarcasm is revealed as strong characteristics of the narrator. Throughout the majority of the story, the narrator continues shows his distaste for any "happy" situation. Much like the hyphenated asides, Carver implements fragmented sentences behind description, to show the narrator pausing for a moment of color commentary.
In addition to this, sentence structure plays along in exemplifying the effort to push readers to understand others’ pasts as the reasons why they are who they are. Again, the narrator is finally understanding Bartleby’s nature and becomes an example to readers. As he does so, he is emotional, which is why he uses melancholy diction, and this also affects the sentence structure of the passage. The sentences are easy to map, using a combination of
Foremost, H.P. Lovecraft utilizes tone in the story to connect the themes to the narrator’s inner dialogue. One of the themes made evident with tone is loneliness. The author creates a dreary and disconsolate atmosphere with the tone when the narrator talks about his predicament.
Unlike Dillard’s use of long sentences to create large amounts of description, Woolf uses short sentences to express her emotion. Beautiful adjectives and verbs, such as fluttering, flood Woolf’s writing, compared to Dillard’s gruesome verbs, such as sputtering, and jerked. Adjectives such as insignificant set up a depressing, emotional, and pensive tone. Using shorter sentences, such as, “The struggle was over,” (Woolf, “The Death of the Moth,”) and, “What he could do he did,” (Woolf, “The Death of the Moth.”) allows the reader to think and reflect about it. In Dillard’s writing, the reader often can imagine what they are reading from her blunt descriptions. In Woolf’s piece, readers reflect more on the meaning and the impact of the piece through the use of short sentences.
She writes, "First there's the vinegar-lipped Reader lady…And then the emaciated German male…and there are your parents…and there's William Burroughs" who all criticize her work (Lamott 72). By using these satirized characters, it connects the reader as they feel that Lamott is thinking of them while writing. Lamott also uses pathos to capture the reader's feelings and emotions. She allows the reader to feel as if they are not alone, and that she can relate. Also she uses cursing, to make it more informal and allows the reader relate more. She finds it difficult to write a first draft, and knows many others feel the same way, too.