Pain is to suffer or cause distress. Pain has been consuming me for the past nine months. The war has a very strong sting in my heart. The past two years of this war has not gone well for practically for anyone. As for Washington, no one, not even I knew what his position was. His position was uncertain. I have decided to not re-enlist for these three main reasons which are: the bad conditions at Valley Forge, the illness and death, and the quality of the clothing.
Howe’s army of 18,000 comfortably quartered in Philadelphia. George Washington decided to build a winter camp (Valley Forge) about 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia. On 1773, the Boston Tea party was held. 310 streetlights were installed in Boston in 1773. In 1777, George Washington’s army arrives at Valley Forge. Scarlet fever is when women who were crushing hardcore on the British red coats. Valley Forge is a winter camp about 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia. Desert is to abandon in a way considered disloyal or treacherous. I am not going to stay at Valley Forge to fight because I do not like the conditions at camp. “ Poor food … cold water … nasty cookery … starve and freeze,” (Waldo 151). Assuming that Washington wanted us to stay and fight, then we need better circumstances. “ My skin and eyes are almost spoil’d with continual smoke,”
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Assuming that I stay, I would still have bad circumstances at Valley Forge, I would be ill which might make me die, and the bad clothing conditions. You and I should not re-enlist because we want to live and could lose the fight. I would rather survive and die old and happy, seeing your grandchildren grow up. Not die young and not see your children or grandchildren grow up, and make your wife a widow and your children heart broken that they won’t have a dad
Valley Forge was a winter camp that was 18 miles northwest from Philadelphia that the American Continental Army spent the winter from 1777-78 during the American Revolutionary war. There were many soldiers at Valley Forge, Many of them died, but many of them also lived. An approximate amount of soldiers at Valley Forge was 12,000 in December 1777 and 8,000 in February 1778. While many soldiers were sick or heave died, the remaining soldiers that survived were being trained by General George Washington. Though staying at Valley forge may have not been the right idea. In the “Estimate of illness and deaths at Valley Forge (Document A)” it shows how many soldiers were sick and how many soldiers
Valley Forge is a military camp in which is 15 miles Northwest of Philadelphia. The camp was settled by the Colonial Army in which they were low on supplies which were poor quality. I would not quit or leave Valley Forge. Although, there were many illnesses, I would still end up staying. I would have stayed due to the fact that only about 23% actually died (Document A). Only 23% died out of a huge population of 8,000 - 12,000 at Valley Forge (Document A). They soldiers at Valley Forge had some support. They had help and support from the Congressional Committee (Document B). Not only did we have help from the Congressional Committee, we also had help from other countries that includes France and Spain. Another reason I would stay at
I am one of those people who would quit Valley Forge. Valley Forge is a winter camp that was developed in the year 1777 to prepare Washington’s army for war. The 18,000 soldiers would have to train for 7 months in the cold weather with limited supplies. I would leave Valley Forge, because from 18,000 healthy soldiers, soon became 7,000 soldiers getting ill, and 2,500 end up dying (Document A).
In the winter of 1777 and 1778, George Washington commanded several patriots to spend the winter at Valley Forge, and I was one of them. With the hard lodging, cold weather, and vague ventilation the living conditions were not easy. Valley Forge was a military camp 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia during the American Revolutionary War. (Doc A.) Starvation, disease, malnutrition, and exposure killed more than 2,500 American soldiers by February 1777. George Washington desired huts for his men with winter almost setting in. At Valley Forge I quit because of the extreme conditions of the lodging along with illness and death. I also knew that my family needed me back home.
In late December of 1777, the Continental Army under the command of George Washington set up an encampment called Valley Forge. Valley Forge was a military camp 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia where the Continental Army spent the winter of 1777-78 during the American Revolution. If I were a soldier during that time, I would’ve re-enlisted. I would do this for one reason, courage. First, soldiers had a better chance of surviving than dying. In December when they first arrived, they had 12,000 men. By February 1778, they had 8,000 men, meaning that 4,000 left. Out of the 8,000 that stayed, close to 50% of them got sick with a disease called smallpox (3,989 to be exact). Out of the 3,989 that were sick, only about 2,000 of them died. So I could
The author mentioned that washington and his troops spent time at valley forge. He wanted the reader to understand that the soldiers were not trained or had many supplies, and he wanted you to know that they spent their time there training. In the text it states "Washington used the time at valley forge to train them." That shows that washing wanted to use hi time at valley forge to train his
Also in Document C, Dr. Abigence Waldo says, " I am sick... vomit half my time..." The torture and agony these men have gone through were insane. The chance of surviving was 50% chance. Even though there is an equal amount of chance of me living and dying, I would not take that risk.Additionally, the living conditions were awful. According to doc C Dr Abigence says, "I am sick..poor food-hard lodging-fatigue-nasty cloaths-nasty cookery- commit half my time-Smoak'd out my senses- the Devil isn't - I can't endure it- why are we sent here to starve... solider, his bare feet are seen through is worn out shoes, his legs nearly naked from the tattered remains of an only pair of stockings.." What you just read was written from a primary source, it was written in a diary from a surgeon during his winter at valley forge. In the same Document he also says " HEartily wish myself at home.." This comes to show you how terrible this time was. No one wanted to be in this nightmare, they rather be home, with their family and friends. It is indescribable to show how rotten this time was at Valley Forge.Finally, I would quit because of the terrible
The cold, harsh winter in Valley Forge, Pennsylvania dejects the soldiers who continue to starve, freeze, and remain ill. The Continental Army doesn’t even know whether they will survive due to these bad conditions, and most of the soldiers start to lose their hope, strength, and willingness. It all started when George Washington was granted the general of the American army by the Continental Congress in 1775. His soldiers have been struggling day and night to fight for their independence and freedom. However, Washington’s troops were forced to retreat to Pennsylvania by the British army, and are now stuck in the winter camp at Valley Forge. It is cold, the air is smokey, and there is no supplies or goods left for the soldiers. Also, there is a disease spreading around the camp like a virus that continues to infect the Continental Army. How will they ever
The winter at Valley Forge might have signaled the end of the American Revolution. Fortunately for the Continentals though, Washington did not give up. During this time Washington made several additions to his of corps, such as the Prussian General Fried rich von Steuben, who was tasked with making a new training and brought hygiene by separating toilets from food and food separated from disease
Under the leadership of General Washington, one-hundred and fifty-two soldiers were killed and five-hundred and twenty-one wounded. General Washington led his starving and freezing soldiers to valley forge for the winter and led some of his soldiers to dislike his leadership and leave the camp at Valley Forge. Valley Forge was a cold place, and the Continental Army was forced to live in damp and crowded living quarters causing disease to be all over the place. Conditions in the camp were horrible. General Washington's army of approximately twelve thousand had problems getting clothes or food to help them. Diseases such as typhoid, dysentery, typhus, and pneumonia ran rampant. An estimate of two thousand soldiers died in Valley Forge just from disease or lack of food. Morale plummeted and some of General Washington’s men decided to leave the
“Why are we sent here to starve and Freeze…” (Diary of Dr. Albigence Waldo, December 14, 1777.) Dr. Waldo complained about the conditions at Valley Forge, he lived with the continental army with no money and little to no hope. In 1777, George Washington, the general of the Continental Army, decided to build a winter camp at Valley Forge. It was about 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia, quakers, people who believed in peace or pacifists, offered food for the soldiers. Washington wanted to keep an eye on the British army in philadelphia, but his army was not in its best shape. Many soldiers deserted or finished their enlistment, but Washington didn't lose his hope. The winter was cold, their huts were compact and smokey, and they had no money left. A soldier in the continental army should have left Valley Forge because of illness, living conditions, and lack of support by the congress.
In document A, a graph titled, “Death Estimates Due to Illness During Encampment”, reported that form December 1777 to June 1778, that about 2,500 soldiers died at Valley Forge. This stands out among other reasons, because the chance of survival in that camp was not a high chance. Also in document C, Dr. Waldo also quote, “Why are we sent here to starve and freeze.” This quote is from the mind of a soldier who has began to feel concern for his life, and knows his life could very well be taken. With the high chance of death, I certainly would have quit at Valley
Should the soldiers at Valley Forge have quit the Continental Army? Why wouldn’t they have done so? The conditions at the camp were horrid and despicable. Nearly half of the soldiers there were sick according to Winter Quarters by Noel Busch. On top of that, many of the soldiers’ enlistments were about to expire as well. Some soldiers even considered deserting, which was treason. Of course, who were they to blame? The conditions weren’t fit for any human.
Valley Forge where the conditions were so bad that soldiers had worn out clothing, got very sick, and never had a full belly. In December 1777 General George Washington made his winter camp at Valley Forge, Pennsylvania. The British army led by General Howe were kept comfortably in Philadelphia just a few miles away from Valley Forge. Washington now has a problem on his hands. Some of his soldiers only signed up to fight for six to nine months. Their terms were close to ending. Washington needs to figure out how to get his men to reenlist. The question for us is “Should I quit”? I am deciding to stay and reenlist for three reasons, the sickness of the other men, loyalty for my country, and because I believe in America.
Noel F Busch created a chart on the estimates of illnesses and deaths at Valley Forge. (doc.A) According to Busch, there was 12,000 soldiers in December ,but around 3,000 soldiers got sick and 1,800 died. During that time you didn’t know if you had a good chance of staying alive due to the environment around you. This would make me stay because I have a 90% chance of getting sick and a 10% chance of dying ,so I would most likely get sick over dying at Valley Forge and I would rather take my chances than just giving up and leaving the other soldiers by themselves to fight the