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How Did Confucius Affect Ancient China

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Research Question: Who was Confucius, and how did he affect Ancient China?

Introduction
Effective Beginning
Confucius was a moral philosopher and famous teacher who greatly influenced China for over 2,000 years (Myths and Civilization of Ancient Chinese 16 and “Confucius Develops Moral Beliefs” 1).
Background Information
Confucius developed his own philosophy known as Confucianism (“Biography Confucius” 2).
Confucius teachings became the state philosophy of China during the Han Dynasty and the basis of government and civil service exams (“Biography Confucius” 2).
Confucianism greatly influenced society by teaching others benevolence, or kindness which is one of his many beliefs, Jen (“Confucianism and Daoism” 2).
Thesis Statement
Confucius was a famous teacher and philosopher who influenced people in prehistoric China and the world today through his childhood, later life, accomplishments, and beliefs. …show more content…

Evidence - Confucius was born into a noble family, when his parents died, he became a teacher (Chiang 20).
Supporting Evidence - Eventually, he worked for the government, he started out as governor of a small town then worked his way up to advisor of top levels of government (“Biography Confucius” 2).
Analysis of Evidence - As a child, Kong Fuzi (Confucius in Chinese) was still making a difference by becoming a teacher and working for the government, which probably led to him becoming known as the famous Confucius.
Conclusion - In all, Confucius didn’t only affect China as a mature and wise adult, but also changed China as a child through his younger years.
Category 2: Later Life/Death
Mini-Thesis - During Confucius’s later life and even death, he continued to leave important teachings that are still used and thought of

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