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Groom Observation Report

Decent Essays

Introduction – 45 to 60 seconds
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Sadie’s community has a summer park program where kids from the area can play and learn in a safe environment for free.
She got a job as a summer intern helping those running the program.
One of the challenges that the program faces each year is being able to provide a daily, healthy snack that won’t break the budget.
Sadie saw a documentary last week about growing mini gardens of fresh fruits and veggies.
Since there is a lot of unused land in the park, Sadie thought that this land could be used for a mini garden.
Kids could learn how to grow fresh fruits and veggies, and then those foods could be used as healthy snacks.
The program could provide healthy snacks while teaching kids gardening skills and …show more content…

For example, she noted some statistics found in the documentary that supported a direct connection between better health and kids who ate vegetables regularly.
She theorized that a mini garden that provided those vegetables would potentially increase the health of the kids involved.
Surely, the directors would be able to see how she analyzed the information and applied it to the program!

Remediation for Clip A – 25 to 35 seconds
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Sadie knew that she simply couldn’t pass her idea on to the directors and hope to get a result.
She knew that an informative text was kinda like a recipe – she had to explain how it worked.
Through the informative text, Sadie would need to explain what a mini garden was as well as how it would be used in the program.
She would also have to explain why this is a good idea, convincing the directors to adopt it.
If she could only teach them about the concept of a mini garden through her informational text, she knew they would go for it!

Remediation for Clip B – 25 to 35 seconds
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Conveying the purpose to the directors was a crucial step in the informative text writing

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