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Logos was another notable technique that Bittman seemed to use effectively. Throughout his article in which he provided concrete examples of comparisons and followed them with hard-hitting statistics to back them up. In his article, he argues that a happy meal for a family will cost about $23 while a traditional home cooked meal is about $14. This statistical evidence coincides with the claim made in the title of the article itself, which may convince his readers and boost his main points. Further in to the essay, he starts to give details such as “93 percent of those with limited access to supermarkets do have access to vehicles, though it takes them 20 more minutes to travel to the store than the national average” (as cited in Lunsford, Ruszkiewicz, & Walters, 2013, pg. 661). These details are irrelevant in terms of the main thesis, but they do provide some factual support for Bittman’s basis in convincing the reader that he is well-informed about the growing issues and …show more content…

One issue includes Bittman always referencing his comparisons back to McDonald’s foods, which is a problem because it cannot be a representative sample of all fast food restaurants. This may affect the credibility of his claims entirely. Another issue is that the comparisons examples that were made are questionable mainly due to the lack of sufficient details provided. For example, he claims that most people can afford real food because nearly 50 million Americans receive food stamps from the government. However, he fails to include major details such as the income level of the people enrolled in these programs, and the effectiveness of the program on a larger scale. A careful reader may dispute his claims unless given further details on the backing evidence. It might have been more beneficial if Bittman did not include the claim at all, but he did because he was expecting his readers to trust him at this

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