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Description Of Description And Narration

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May 29, 2017 ENTRY 7: Description and Narration Prewriting

Describe:
1. The background drapes pour over the darkest bronze of curtain rods securely mounted onto the wall supporting two long, thick, silky, espresso-colored, double-thermal, 84 ' ' long curtains with a layer of fragile chiffon grazing the carpet gently due to the air conditioning vent kicking on and blowing the bottom left corner of the drape up and over gently to the side of the beige wall in my upstairs bedroom. In the foreground, my brother, Anthony, two years younger than I, lies on his stomach on the floor at the bottom left of the photograph with myself on the bottom right, shoulder-to-shoulder with him; he is wearing a gray, short-sleeved t-shirt with a …show more content…

■ Sound
Two specific, concrete details for the sense of sound that describes my experience of this picture with my brother are the obnoxious audibility of our laughter that vibrates in unison every time we are with each other, together with the stern shouting from down the stairs from our mother requesting a lowered volume.
■ Smell
Two specific, concrete details for the sense of smell that describes my experience of this picture with my brother are the Old Spice Swagger scent from his cologne and deodorant coupled with the Spring Renewal scented Febreeze that I always sprayed across the carpet.
Taste
Two specific, concrete details for the sense of taste that describes my experience of this picture with my brother are the metallic taste of the brand new retainer I had placed behind my bottom front four teeth the day prior, not to mention, the taste of raspberry lemonade flavored Blistex chapstick on my lips with the subtlety of every word I spoke.
■ Touch
Two specific, concrete details for the sense of touch that describes my experience of this picture with my brother are the sensation of his sharp, bony, shoulder up scraping against mine, similarly, the strange, fibrous sensation of my hair across my upper lip as if I had a existent mustache!

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