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Creative Writing On Hockey

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I could feel the sweat dripping down my arm, rolling down my fingers, searing my eyes. I was going past the 5th defender, screaming vulgar words at both opposing players and the refs for penalties not called on the other team as I went past them such as a hook by the first and holding by the third, as I remembered my dad, years ago telling me something I will remember for the rest of my life. “Ronan, however good you get at hockey, whether you play pro, rec or college, what separates the good from the great is their dedication to the game and they're drive to succeed and progress.” We were driving through the cracked road, the entrance to both Lawrence Prep and the rink where I played travel hockey. The leaves were beginning to turn a fall-orange, and there was a winter-like chill in the air. My dad was telling me the usual things, from keep your head up to don’t make stupid plays, as I prepared myself for the game. He pulled over by the entrance, and I went to get my stuff out of the trunk. I slung my bag over my shoulder and pulled out my stick. I went to get my red and white jerseys, with the bright L in the middle, Keenan and 92 in the back, and A in the top right of my jerseys. As I walked in, my head coach, Mike, told me there was going to be a captains meeting after we changed into our warm up clothes. I went to the …show more content…

You actually played really good today, I thought to myself. 2 goals, a textbook-perfect hit and great overall play. As I walked out of the rink, Maks’ dad said good game today, as other parents congratulated me on my goal, and i said thanks and grinned. I walked into my dad’s dark green Toyota truck, threw my bag, jerseys, and stick into the trunk, and walked towards the front of the truck. As I got into the front of the truck, I opened the front passenger-side door, and sat down. “Ahhhhhhhh.” I sighed. My dad was quiet for a minute, and then began his gamely-critiquing of my

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