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Creative Writing: All Quiet On The Western Front

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You have successfully entered enemy territory. You and the other recon soldiers have crossed the distance of open plain, skirted the barbed wire, and are close to the enemy trenches. You all lie on your stomachs in the mud, rifles in hand. So far, the going is good. You don’t seem to have been spotted, and no shouts of alarm split the air. The sky is grey with approaching rain, the earth is brown, sodden mud, and the wire gleams a deadly silver. Then you catch a flash of another colour, dull against the horizon. You turn to your commander where he lies beside you, and point. “What’s that, you think?” Your commander’s gaze follows your finger to the colour and he hisses a curse. “Enemy troops,” he growls. “They’re trying to sneak behind and surround us.” And they are. You can see now that they’re slowly moving. By now the rest of your patrol has noticed the enemy as well, and uneasy whispers and murmurs form a low drone in the air. Fear chills you. You don’t want to die. Not here, not today. …show more content…

Only the commander remains prone. “Stop!” he thunders, but it’s too late. The enemy, seeing you stand and run, has opened fire. You sprint for your trenches, forgetting the others exist, but you feel something smash through the back of your skull. There is a flash of fiery agony, then everything blazes white. But you still have time to see your friends fall around you. Dead, because you tried to

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