College Essay Rough Draft

Frigaliment Importing Co. V. B.N.S International Sales Textbook P. 117 Facts Frigaliment Importing and B.N.S Corporation came into agreement that B.N.S will provide chickens for sale to Frigaliment. The contract contained two separate shipments in which each shipment contained different weighted chicken. Frigaliment received the first shipment and noticed that the heavier chickens were older chicken that were meant for stewing not frying. Frigaliment immediately sto24pped the second shipment and sued that they did not provide the right type of chicken in which they were asking for young chickens. B.N.S (the defendant) states that chicken can mean anything as long as they are in the same

When I was growing up, my parents expected me to do great in school and they taught me that getting a good education was your ticket to living a nice and successful life and career, and in order to do well in school I would have to study and get good grades. I actually enjoyed school for the most part. I was that kind of person that actually studied and did homework to the best of my ability. Getting a good education is very important to get a successful career and life.

It was the bottom of the sixth inning of a USSA sponsored tournament and I was hitting fourth that inning, cleanup. Jake, our second baseman and the literalist on my team, was hitting first, Jake tries to bunt and misses. “C’mon Jake, get the barrel on the ball,” Said my first base coach Matt Fitzmorris, who played in the majors, “Let’s go!”

Rough draft I remember when my dad told my brother and I that he was going to buy a brand new PlayStation soon. I didn’t think much of it as I did with everything else, the first week we had it I sat around and didn't touch it or think about it, my mind was always seemed to be busy with other ideas. I don’t remember much from my first time playing it but I distinctly remember on how intrigued I was.

From my days as a little kindergartener till now, I have always taken school very seriously and worked hard to be an honor roll student. I have never missed a day of school in my entire life and I have never failed to turn in an assignment. I have always been determined to be the best in my class and never give up. What drives me to work hard, are the lessons my parents have instilled in my mind at an early age. Since I was little, my parents have preached the importance of school and working hard for my future. Their lessons have taught me profoundly and I can’t thank them enough.

Progress Thesis: Commas are my weakness, as my first rough draft essay “Prayer in School,” showed me, but I noticed an improvement in my comma use in my next two rough draft essays. I. In my first rough draft essay, I realized from my grade and from my college teacher that my knowledge of commas was limited. A. I had fourteen comma errors in my first rough draft “Prayer in School,” including comma splices, introductory subordinate clause mistakes, and compound sentences without commas (“Prayer in School” 1-4).

but I forced myself to work so hard because it was one of few constants in my life. Each new school meant new friends and by the time I hit middle school the cliques were formed and I missed out. I soared through school up until seminar classes in San Diego, because I had to put effort in. I was used to being ahead of everyone else and here I was challenged. That is when I learned my passion for

“As many as one in three first-year students won't make it back for sophomore year” (“Freshmen retention rate”). It just so happened that I followed that statistic. Many colleges do not care much if students drop out or flunk out once their tuition checks have been cashed (Los Angeles Times).Growing up in a very strict household and attending private Catholic school, I was ready to spread my wings and fly. I was looking forward to that independence, my own rules and living on my own. I was enthusiastic to get started on my college journey. In my mind, I was about to live the dream. I would experience my own place to live, no rules, and get to hang out with friends! Oh, and college, too. I was not prepared to be so distracted

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When I was a little girl my friends and I always talked about what we were going to be when we grew up. Some said a teacher; others said a nurse, secretary, and even a mom. I knew what I was going to be, but what we don't think about is how we get to be these things. We float through elementary school, having small children fun. Next we go to middle school trying to find our ways in the world, some of us worries about grades, and some don't. Not many thinking ahead of high school, let alone college. In high school we soon realize that grades are very important and better grades give you a better chance at better colleges. So those of us who want to go to college start cramping down on our studies so we can get those desirable grades. I may have not been the perfect student throughout high school. My Study habits could have been better, but one thing I do know is that I want to do more with my life than just a high school diploma.

As a high school senior, I spent all year searching for a compatible college that fits my requirements. I wanted a college that is affordable, so when I graduate I am not stuck with a massive debt. I wanted a campus that is has friendly people and feels like home. Finally, the college must provide me with the right skills to start my career. With those three standards in mind, I narrowed my choices to one perfect college.

Ever since I can remember I have always been passionate about helping other people, which then sparked my desire to continue my education. As I began to grow older I witnessed my four brothers drop out of high school, and that lead to the expectation

My parents were unable to pursue their educational goals, so they made a commitment to instill in me, the value of education. They taught me that college will provide me with the foundation necessary to pursue my academic goals and to prepare me for success in my professional development. It also gives

School is important to me. From watching and hearing things those around me have said, I fear many believe that higher education is just something that has to be done. They don't strive for good colleges because they want to do well, they strive because they feel like they need to do it. While I do believe you need high education, and there is no way around it, I also strive for the best I can get because I want the best I can get. I want to strive for the best, and I want to experience a univeristy that can challange me, but also support me in all of my after education