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College Admissions Essay: My Journey To Medicine

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Quitting high school at age 14 was the start of my journey towards medicine. While seemingly counterintuitive, this act altered my course by paving a path of opportunity through challenge. After stumbling through life for two years with little direction, I realized that I needed to change my behaviors to change my life. Learning of a residential military school for at-risk youth, I volunteered to commit myself to the rigors of the program and work towards reclaiming my potential. For five months, I marched, I ran, and I followed orders as I persevered through the grueling program, and in turn, I grew into a confident and productive young adult. Inspired by the goals of achieving my GED and starting anew, I flourished under the strict guidance. As my confidence soared, a newfound sense of self emerged, and I began to lead by example. When I showed up late to formation, instead of muttering a defense, I merely replied to the shouting cadre, “No excuse, Sergeant,” and accepted …show more content…

She noted my community involvement, and how I tenderly assist children with cognitive or physical disabilities engage in sports, the arts, and music; thus, their confidence and independence nurtured through achieving new possibilities. She remarked on my influence on her to become healthier as she supports my racing in trail- and ultra-running. She commented on my own risk of life when I encountered a young mother, trafficked across the border of Texas from Mexico, and how I placed her safety above mine as I aided in her escape from her captors. She watched as I lovingly fed my grandfather his last meal. My rich experiences and opportunities, the lessons learned, and my mother have influenced me to foster a personal philosophy regarding the inherent worth in each of us. In my pursuit to be of service to others, I know that my foundation will guide me

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