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Bill Fenter's The Bee Tree

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Action: “In the kitchen, he stirred the coals in the old Home Comfort wood range. The coffee in the black percolator on the side of the range was still hot. He had made it by lamplight before going out. He poured a mug of the strong brew and sipped it as he took a heavy cast iron skillet from a hook on the wall and placed it on the range top. He set the coffee down and dropped a tablespoon full of soft butter into the warming skillet and broke two eggs into it, lightly salted them and sipped his coffee until they began to whiten around the edge.” This excerpt comes from The Bee Tree by Kenneth Fenter. Bill is in his home making breakfast for himself before his son comes out his room. This paragraph is descriptive writing in the way that it shows action. It shows actions as it follows chronological order. He makes his coffee and then cooks his eggs. It is descriptive writing because it includes sensory details. The coffee is “hot” (touch) and “strong” (taste). The cast iron is describes as “heavy” and the butter is “soft”. It also describes the eggs as they cook around the edges (sight). Setting: …show more content…

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