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Becoming The Dragon

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Struck by lightning as a teenager, and now prone to wrecking electrical devices when within reach, it’s clear from the beginning that Andy Kerimov is not your average boy. Because of his sudden immunity to computers and televisions, Andy must discover other ways to entertain himself. He picks up reading, finds a man who teaches him archery and becomes a rather remarkable chef for which his family is grateful. When Andy’s father, a Russian scientist making gains on teleportation, forgets some important notes, Andy finds himself at the military base at the exact moment they decide to have a test run. Suddenly teleported to another world, Andy must quickly learn how to survive in a place with unwelcoming magical and fantastical creatures. Elves, mages, orcs, dragons, and gnomes occupy this strange planet, and it isn’t long before Andy is captured and sold into slavery. Tortured and starved, Andy finds his moral compass slipping sideways as he must do what it takes to …show more content…

While I thought this story was carefully thought out, the actual execution left something to be desired. The whole book felt a little disjointed to me. There were seemingly random events that left me feeling confused as to the significance, and flashbacks that weren’t clearly portrayed as flashbacks. The author also seemed to skip around a lot. Little parts were written from different characters perspectives which detracted from the overall flow of the plot. In my opinion, too much time was spent on the world building of this new universe. Elaborate descriptions of things that didn’t directly impact the story were also a common occurrence. I found those long paragraphs difficult to visualize and wanted only to skip ahead to the action. While it seems rather impressive someone could imagine and put onto paper such a strange and unusual world, there were simply too many details and unfamiliar words that left me confused and

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