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Attention Whole Food Shoppers Rhetorical Analysis

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Ethan Babcock
Ms. Hart
English 250
20 October 2016
Attention Whole Foods Shoppers Analysis (Rough Draft) While I was younger me and my family worked on a farm and eventually as I grew up I worked at Hy-Vee in produce and worked my way up to the assistant manager for produce. I was given a great opportunity to learn about organic foods and about the Green Revolution (research, development, and technology that increased agricultural production worldwide). Today though, most grade school students know about organic foods but almost all of them know about world hunger but do not know the extent of how bad it is. As students go to college, they start to learn more about how bad world hunger is, but some are taught that the Green Revolution is not …show more content…

Paarlberg focuses his argument to his students to help get rid of conclusions his students settle on, on the issue of world hunger. But instead of settling he bases his own conclusions more on the specific facts than on the general observation of his peers. He uses examples in his journal from New York Times editorial “World Food Crisis,” also from the U.N. Food and Agriculture Organization, American scientist Norman Borlaug and factual evidence from his own studies. Citing these sources boosts Paarlberg’s credibility by showing that he has done his homework and has provided facts and statistics. He also uses personal statistics from his own studies to introduce and support the issue, which shows that he has a personal stake in and experience with the …show more content…

He points out facts about how the Green Revolution originally was laughed, then proves that these original thoughts untrue: “the Green Revolution has brought nothing to India except “indebted and discontented farmers,”… India, for instance, doubled its wheat production between 1964 and 1970 and was able to terminate all dependence on international food aid by 1975.”(143-144) This fact introduce and support the idea that Paarlberg has done his research around the world probing that the Green Revolution is the seeding of the future. Grose continues with many facts: “In Asia these new seeds lifted tens of millions of small farmers out of desperate poverty…India’s poverty rate fell from 60 percent to just 27 percent… the Green Revolution was good for both agriculture and social justice.” These facts are a few of many that logically support his claim that it is a substantial and real problem that world hunger is bigger than anyone ever thought. This helps his audience understand that the Green Revolution could be the answer to help end world hunger. The details and numbers build an appeal to logos and impress upon the reader that this is a solution worth looking

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