In his article, Penrod first starts out talking about how a football team won an Arizona state championship the previous year. Penrod then goes on to talk about how no one paid any attention to the Science bowl team since everyone was focused on the athletes. Furthermore, Penrod points out how there is “disdain for the educated harbored in much of society,” and also speaks about stereotypes associated with intelligent kids and how uneducated celebrities are not setting a good example for future kids to get an education. Many intelligent kids are being overlooked because of the stigma of being a “nerd,” as well as the fact that anti-intellectualism is becoming more popular. A man, author Grant Penrod, wrote “Anti-Intellectualism: Why We …show more content…
Even though Penrod uses very good examples that pertain to pathos, he is lacking the use of ethos in his paper. Penrod does not truly exercise the use of ethos, counterarguments, consideration of other positions, and convincing reasons or evidence in his paper. Throughout the essay, Penrod practically uses hasty generalizations. The reason I say this is due to the fact that he utilizes information and comments from online boards. Yes, the comments on these boards do in fact appeal to pathos, however, they are not very applicable to the appeal of ethos. Penrod does not use very credible websites when looking up his information and adding it to his paper. For example, he uses a website called “talkingcock.com.” This website is not very credible and consists of an online discussion board. Furthermore, Penrod uses information from a website called, “Angelfire.com” to talk about famous high school dropouts. Although this information may be valid, it does not mean that absolutely every single high school dropout is going to be successful. Penrod focuses solely on the famous high school dropouts without acknowledging that there are in fact high school dropouts that are not successful and rich like the celebrities he has brought up. Therefore, Penrod fails to acknowledge a counterargument at this time, as well as being logical. Also, tying into the fact
Being a smart kid is an honor to most, but as a child, Mark Bowden believed otherwise. In “The Dumb Kids’ Class” he tells his unique experience in Catholic school, where he was in the dumb kids’ class and then switched into the smart class, and discovers the true differences between them.
Ethos is basically the authors credibility, the reader must decide if the author of the writing is trustworthy and believable. Pathos is how to author appeals
In “Hidden Intellectualism” , Gerald Graff explains his views on the topic of being smart. His explanation was you are either smart in the streets or in the educational system . During Graffs younger days how he hid his intellect during his days so he wouldn't have to deal with any bullying or being labeled as a weird person. He also was scared of a beating if he proved he was smart . Instead of showing he was smart in the educational system, he showed his intellect by arguing about the cool stuff that people conversed about growing up in his rough neighborhood. Graff refers to the cool stuff as in sports. Graff mentions another person who noticed his hidden intellect, Michael Warner. Warner comes from the background of a christian pentecostal
In the article, “Hidden Intellectualism” by Gerald Graff examines the differences between “book smarts” and “street smarts.” Graff argues that many schools and college miss the opportunity of incorporating students’ street smarts within the classroom environment. He addresses his audience of fellow educators. Graff’s main point is that a student can connect with their learning if they practice with a subject they’re interested in. The author supports the main idea by using his personal experience of learning about creating arguments and using evidence from reading sports magazines (63). Graff’s experience of learning educational material from sports helps further develop his argument. If kids can talk about sports, video games, movies,
In Grant Penrod’s essay called Anti-Intellectualism: Why We Hate Smart Kids he starts by talking about his high school football team and that they won the championship again this year. He says the speech and debate team also won the championship this year. The football team continues to receive mass amounts of praise and attention even after their win, while on the other hand the academic teams that won receive miniscule amounts of recognition. The academic teams might get a shout out at the end of an assembly, but never the amount of praise that the football team receives. The educated kids have the label of nerd and with this label; social norms become more difficult for them. Penrod says that even celebrities make it look like dropping out
In his essay titled “Hidden Intellectualism”, Gerald Graff questions the traditional academic approach that correlates the school curriculum of colleges and high schools with intelligence. He believes that schools may not be promoting the full potential of students because they rely too much on the academic skills rather than the topics themselves. This means that schools often focus on the analysis and interpretation of academic papers rather than considering expanding the curriculum to have more topics that interest students. As a result, many students cannot express their true potential because they cannot get engaged in these school enforced topics. Schools underestimate their “hidden intelligence” because they do not try to promote their
Grant Penrod, a young college student at Arizona State University, shows how rough the “smart kids” have it, in his essay “Anti-Intellectualism: Why We Hate the Smart Kids.” In Penrod’s essay, he shows the reader the cruel and unusual punishment that “smart kids” go through. Penrod uses a very calm tone of writing but ramps it up with occasional quotes of hate towards these certain students.
America Needs Its Nerds,” an essay indited by Leonid Fridman, proposes a pertinent issue in today’s society: astutely gifted students are ostracized. Fridman argues that keenly intellective, curious students neegd to stop being inglorious of being perspicacious and curious. Society needs to transmute because their current posture towards astuteness is one of pessimism. Fridman develops these arguments in his essay by utilizing the rhetorical strategy of parallelism, drawing conclusions, and utilizing
Should students be taught to read and become interested in sports rather than proper intellectual subjects? This is the question that Gerald Graff seeks to answer in his essay, “Hidden Intellectualism”. Graff begins his essay by asking the reader if he or she knows anybody who they consider to be street smart but struggles in school. His assertion relating to these particular individuals is that maybe it is the school system’s fault for not properly learning to, “. . . tap into such street smarts and channel them into good academic work” (260). According to Graff, the reason why schools overlook these potential academic abilities of students is because street subjects are not considered to be “intellectual”.
Most people, when asked, say that a person is intelligent if they have “book smarts.” People that are book smart can write and converse about subjects taught in school. On the other hand, people with “street smarts” aren’t seen as intellectuals because the subjects they are knowledgeable about are not traditional. In his essay called “Hidden Intellectualism,” Gerald Graff insists that schools and colleges are missing an opportunity to translate street smarts into academic work.
Pathos is used in order to link the essay with the reader’s emotions and ethos is used to show the writers moral character. For example, pathos is used when Kozol speaks to a student of a Bronx high school, “Think of it this way,” said a sixteen-year-old girl. “If people in New York woke up one day and learned that we were gone…how would they feel?...I think they’d be relieved.” (Kozol 205) This part of the essay really made me feel sad for this girl who lives in a society where she has grown up feeling like now one cares about her or others of her race.
For instance, when Levitt and Dubner write “” [explain how it is ethos, logos, pathos] (Levitt and Dubner) they use evidence to demonstrate the logical reasoning behind what would otherwise be deemed as a radical conclusion. Freakonomics relies more heavily on logos and ethos than on pathos since logos and ethos work together to provide the audience with evidence supporting the speaker’s conclusions while simultaneously proving that the speaker and the evidence that he presents is reliable. When they write, “” they reference an acclaimed individual to both build ethos while simultaneously using that individual’s research to enhance their logos (Levitt and Dubner). Levitt and Dubner generally only employ pathos when they find that comic relief is necessary to prevent the audience of teenagers and adults from becoming entrenched in the numbers. For example when they state, “” they use humor to create a more lighthearted atmosphere which relieves some of the inherent tension that comes with talking about provocative subjects (Levitt and
What is the first thing people think of when they hear the “smart” kid talks about his accomplishments? Those smart kids get called a nerd and automatically have to deal negative things all because society itself thinks it is okay to do so. In “Anti-Intellectualism: Why We Hate Smart Kids”, Grant Penrod explains why anti-intellectualism exist. People will remember what the anti-intellectuals do but not so much the intellectuals. Society envy those who are smarter than them and only look at any other accomplishment besides education accomplishments. Anti- Intellectuals tend to bash others around them for their success academically. That is how society works in every generation. Penrod informs everyone of an example of how nerds can be treated differently especially in the school system. More recognition goes to sports teams instead of debates teams, which is factual. Penrod’s lack of credible information and the tone that has been presented has brought a lot of thoughts that need to be analyzed more closely on why he presented this article this way.
I found it important to understand what types of intellectuals there are and how they feel, so that we may have a better understanding of why we tend to hate the smart kids. In Grant Penrods paper “Anti-Intellectualism: Why We Hate the Smart Kids”, he talks about how intellectuals constantly see their efforts trivialized and society’s distaste for intellectuals. He provides evidence to his statement through stereotypes of geeks and nerds, public figures, and
Graff says that putting students in classes in the contemporary system is wasting and limiting students’ potential and creativity (198). Complaining that intellects do not meet the success standard set by schools, Graff proves that schools limit the intellect students can achieve in their academic career (198-199).